FIC: And You Belong to Me (Luke/Leia, R)

Nov 01, 2008 18:18

Title: And You Belong to Me

Author: jedinemo

Pairing/Characters: Luke/Leia, mentions of Han, Chewie, Vader

Rating: R

Word count: 3310

Written for: celebcorps

Request: Something with them ending a romantic relationship, due to either finding out they're related, or simple circumstance, against the both of their wills - for the greater good/it's the right thing ( Read more... )

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sharp_tongue November 2 2008, 05:50:36 UTC
Oh, very, very nice. The ending really struck me in the heart.

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jedinemo November 3 2008, 06:38:51 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad that bittersweet feeling came across.

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jedinemo November 3 2008, 06:45:14 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! It is hard to find this pairing, but it has so much energy, especially since they went for so long without knowing their real relations. Plenty of time for things to develop.

And as for Leia, well she often gets written as virginal, especially in Leia/Han stories. But she's aggressive and self-determined in every other part of her life, so why not this one?

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pronker November 2 2008, 06:14:40 UTC
I, too, am pleased that Luke was not a Jedi saint and that their farewell was human enough for Leia. This was seamless from the ROTJ ending, nice, and you included the big news of the day, Vader's death and the Emperor's defeat.

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jedinemo November 3 2008, 06:51:29 UTC
Thanks! While Luke has tremendous self-control, his feelings for Leia (even staying clear of attraction) are rather strong. And I think he'd have a hard time denying her something she asked of him.

Plus he's been through so much emotionally on the Death Star, I just saw him as needing that comfort as much as she.

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moonspinner November 2 2008, 07:05:01 UTC
The coolest thing about this fic is how it could so easily fit into canon. I really liked the moment when she realised their intense post coital serenity was based on their sharing the same womb. Incest has always fascinated and this is the first Luke/Leia I've read where neither was dark. Nice.

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jedinemo November 3 2008, 06:59:26 UTC
Thank you! Sex done right can be the gateway to real emotional openness, and since they're so close anyway I saw it as bringing them into this unmatchable world of intimacy.

I think it would be way different and way creepier if the physical relationship didn't start before they knew, though. Kind of like the set of fraternal twins in Britain who were adopted separately, but ending up marrying each other without knowing the truth...

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Fabulous! vysila November 2 2008, 13:39:33 UTC
Beautifully written, with a powerful emotional resonance. I loved it.

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Re: Fabulous! jedinemo November 3 2008, 07:01:01 UTC
Thank you very much! It really means something when the praise comes from someone who's been in the fandom for a long time.

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