I loved how you took this. It was such a great interpretation of the prompt. I like how even being demeaned like this, Elle kept her spunk and sense of self worth. There was a great power play going on here that I really loved. It really emphasized how much power they each have over one another.
My favorite parts were: He might kill her for this unconceivable loss of control and balance, but it feels so very good than even the idea of hating her like this for the rest of his life is temptation of the most exquisite kind.
and She doesn’t want to want this, to need this, but the lines her mind has built between Gabriel and Sylar are blurring now. She feels nostalgic, wanton and her pride is the only reason she doesn’t reach down between her legs to stroke herself to orgasm.
It just says so much about the dynamic between them. I think you really hit something great here.
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I loved how you took this. It was such a great interpretation of the prompt. I like how even being demeaned like this, Elle kept her spunk and sense of self worth. There was a great power play going on here that I really loved. It really emphasized how much power they each have over one another.
My favorite parts were:
He might kill her for this unconceivable loss of control and balance, but it feels so very good than even the idea of hating her like this for the rest of his life is temptation of the most exquisite kind.
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She doesn’t want to want this, to need this, but the lines her mind has built between Gabriel and Sylar are blurring now. She feels nostalgic, wanton and her pride is the only reason she doesn’t reach down between her legs to stroke herself to orgasm.
It just says so much about the dynamic between them. I think you really hit something great here.
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You did a great job with the characterization and writing their way of thinking ;D
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