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Jan 30, 2007 19:12

I don't know why I pretend like I have control over what happens. >_>;;

The First to Sin, pt 2 )

the first to sin, wip, serial 5

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tygati January 31 2007, 00:49:06 UTC
*_____* Hello plot. And naked Sin. And escaping and codewords and more plot and... Yes. Purr. *.* We love you, yes we do...

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skylark97 January 31 2007, 23:27:19 UTC
You guys are entirely too nice to me. ^_^;;

*tackle glomps* Looking at a few of your outlines helped, because then it was easier to make outlines for this and the other stories. :D

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tygati February 2 2007, 19:20:08 UTC
*blinkblink* >.> That's kinda scary, that my crazy notes helped... Does that mean your brain works like mine? o.o; Poor brain...

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mechante_fille January 31 2007, 01:40:50 UTC
I want Sinberries! Heh. This was so awesome! I love that all the people closest to Tobin are really spies, and that they all love him and seem to want what's best for him. I wonder who they all work for? They seemed to be outside of the crime syndicate stuff, but... Hm. Obviously Gino's dad is important, but I'm unsure if he is Mr. Craig or not. If so, I'm guessing rival company? And, oh! Amanda and Os are sibs! Interesting... This Mr. Craig has a good team. Makes me think of MacGuyver's company, or like She-spies. With guys. And, um, gals.

I'm so glad that the bad flower people didn't get him. And Gino stripping him and blushing? So cute! *sigh* I just love this, so much!!

*twirls you about* *loves*

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skylark97 January 31 2007, 23:32:04 UTC
XD Heehee! You know, I didn't actually think of it in terms of 'spies' until you put it that way. *snickers* Although, now I'm not entirely sure what I thought they were, cause spies fits. ^_^;;

Heehee! There are a couple companies all in play. It'll be interesting to see how well I can get them all put into the mix. ^_^;;

bad flower people

*dies laughing* I had to make them florists. I don't even know what I was thinking that a florist was the first business I thought of. ^_^;;

*flying tackle glomps you*

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mechante_fille February 1 2007, 15:17:22 UTC
Although, now I'm not entirely sure what I thought they were,

Previously allied employees?

Hm, I don't think 'previous' is quite write. More like there is an established claim on their loyalty, already... I shall have to think more on this...

*huggles*

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finnyb January 31 2007, 01:43:44 UTC
*squeal*

Like! Like! Like!

(And not at all because Sin escaping from the Tower is rather like my own [hopefully permanent] escape from my mother, really!)

*giggles*

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skylark97 January 31 2007, 23:33:13 UTC
*tackle glomps*

(You did it, though! You managed to get out from under her control, and that's half the battle yes? *huggles* I'm so happy for you.)

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finnyb February 1 2007, 00:36:15 UTC
*giggles and falls over backwards as she gets tackle-glomped*

(Yep, I did it...hopefully. That is to say I'm up here in Calgary and we're gonna do our best to see to it that I don't hafta go back down there and live with her. But yes, I did it, insofar as "I did it" equals "I left in the middle of the day while she was at work without telling her.")

*hugs*

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skylark97 February 1 2007, 00:40:53 UTC
^_________^

(Hey, whatever it takes, kid. ;3 What matters is that you're not there now, and you're working to keep it that way. And you just sound so much happier now than you have in the past.)

*tackle hugs*

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tsaiko January 31 2007, 01:49:46 UTC
PLOT TWISTS! AND ESCAPE! AND KIDNAPPING! AND SIN NAKED AND LAYING ON LEATHER!

I love this story. XD

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skylark97 January 31 2007, 23:36:33 UTC
XDD!! Yes, can't forget the naked Sin. *snickers*

*tackle glomps you* Any luck with Puss in Boots or Pooka? *puppy eyes*

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starparty January 31 2007, 04:48:07 UTC
*dies dead* I love you <3 <3 *_* Love this story so so so much!!

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skylark97 January 31 2007, 23:37:03 UTC
*tackle glomps and attempts to revive?*

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