Delightful. Absolutely delightful. I 'specially like the Aunts' conversation--it feels very realistic, as if it could actually happen. Great job. More?
^_^;; There wasn't enough alcohol to keep going...Still, thanks. I have a such a hard time with the description versus dialogue thing. I always want to either just do one or the other. Blending them together is a pain. [/whining]
I'm glad the Aunts didn't come across too forced. ^_^
I actually think that the Aunt scene is better without description, because they're described enough from their voices. By not describing them much physically, they feel like they could be anyone's aunts--including mine.
yeah, okay, here i was wishing for more, and voila, there is more. i'm freakin' exicted and LOVE. yes, the LOVE. oh, i'm fangirling. but that's okay. poor talbot. having to listen to his aunts discuss his sexual prowess. poor boy.
Of course not. ;3 Poor boy. I think AJ's got his work cut out for him. Both to help Tal convince his parents that he's gay and then to convince Tal that he's not just around for the money. ^_^;;
It's your fault! I'm not really remembering why at the moment, but I'm sure it is!!! ^_______^ *tackle glomps you*
The Aunts were a riot - every relative I ran away from.
Parts of them are my family (my grandmother tells the world's dirtiest jokes sometimes and it seems that any time I'm around any of my relatives, they're always gossiping about each other *shrugs*), and then I do think parts of them were inspired from some of the conversations I'd been reading in your journal and Rykaine's about your family. ;3
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I'm glad the Aunts didn't come across too forced. ^_^
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And the Aunts are *wonderful*. I think they're my favorite part of the whole thing.
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I think the "is" in that sentence is supposed to be a "his."
Because if he had, he would have been forced to admit that they wasn’t half bad.
And is the "they" is supposed to be "this"?
Oh dear lord, this is hysterical. So very funny.
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♥LOVE♥
yeah, okay, here i was wishing for more, and voila, there is more. i'm freakin' exicted and LOVE. yes, the LOVE. oh, i'm fangirling. but that's okay. poor talbot. having to listen to his aunts discuss his sexual prowess. poor boy.
oh, i want more. PLEASE oh PLEASE?
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*tackle glomps* Thanks. :3
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Of course not. ;3 Poor boy. I think AJ's got his work cut out for him. Both to help Tal convince his parents that he's gay and then to convince Tal that he's not just around for the money. ^_^;;
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The Aunts were a riot - every relative I ran away from.
Parts of them are my family (my grandmother tells the world's dirtiest jokes sometimes and it seems that any time I'm around any of my relatives, they're always gossiping about each other *shrugs*), and then I do think parts of them were inspired from some of the conversations I'd been reading in your journal and Rykaine's about your family. ;3
*hands over more mist*
Yummy!! *so needs to go out and buy more*
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