What are friends for? // Naruto // PG

Jul 21, 2010 17:37

Title: What are friends for?
Fandom: Naruto
Characters: Sakura, Ino
Rating: PG
Word count: 614
Author Notes: This was written for Word #144 on 15_minute_fic. It has not been cleaned up, or altered beyond the minor editing done within the time limit.

What are friends for? )

15_minute_fic, naruto, fic

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rushin_doll July 23 2010, 21:39:02 UTC
I did promise you comments...

I like this one. A few typos, but that's what happens with quick-written fic, so no biggie.

I spent the first half somewhat put out by how passive Sakura was being, but the end totally made it all work. I love it. Of course now I want to see the fic of "one day" when she pays Ino back, but that's just me.

Long-term continuity is fun!
Ana

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skylar_inari July 24 2010, 04:01:59 UTC
^^ I know! I spot them while rereading it, but editing them defeats the purpose of the whole 15 minute fic thing, so I deal. Ah well.

Hahaha! I'm glad it all worked for you in the end? I do find Sakura hard to write! &hearts

I suck at long-term continuity, Ana! You should know this!

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