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Sky on Fire: Slow Burn - Chapter 10 (Part 3)

Mar 03, 2009 17:45

Title: Slow Burn
Chapter: 10 Misjudged (Part III)
Author/Artist: Skylar Inari
Pairing: Yamanaka Ino/Nara Shikamaru
Theme: 05 - Your precious someone
Word Count: 8268
Disclaimer: Naruto doesn't belong to me. It's Kishimoto's and I just play with it. AU immediately after the Sasuke Retrieval Arc. Part 10 of ? Unbeta'd.

( Chapter 10 - Misjudged (Part III) )

sky on fire, asuma, chouji, shikamaru, slow burn, ino

Comments 4

nova_bright March 5 2009, 07:56:45 UTC

This is a really, really excellent series. I found myself totally absorbed in it. I love the story you are creating for Ino!

skylar_inari March 5 2009, 15:59:49 UTC

Yay! Thanks so much for enjoying it!

[And, hahahaha, your icon is awesome!]

hungrytiger11 March 6 2009, 01:45:07 UTC

Yay! More Slow Burn! I love how you write action and suspense. I am always left on the edge of my seat. I hope they find them soon! I can't wait to see the fallout of this mission too.

I also find it amazing that I am caring so much about Megumi, about Dai, about the Anbu people who are, in fact, your original characters. You make them realistic.

skylar_inari March 6 2009, 16:24:29 UTC

Thanks so much! ^^ I find action hard to do, so it's nice knowing that it works well. Yay!