// --- (debut fic) nhi - i'll change fate.

Sep 25, 2009 02:23

i'll change fate (just for you).
pg. - hankyung/heechul.
a/n: just a thank you for mikky, because skyglazed would be nothing if not for her. happy debut ♥

i'll change fate (just for you). )

pairing: heechul/hankyung, suju: hankyung, rating: pg, #debut fic: 20090925, suju: heechul, #battler: nhi, fandom: super junior

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dongbangsuju20 September 25 2009, 06:40:11 UTC
SPOT

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dongbangsuju20 September 25 2009, 07:00:00 UTC
yhjlahsdgf
I missed your writing sfm ♥

and hanchul~~
you made me one happy girl over here in germany before she has to write a biology test in one hour :D

the next day they pile into the car and laugh, and pretend it never happened but hankyung still remembers how cold heechul's body was in his arms and heechul still remembers the way hankyung's eyes lined red.


just like youth is, hu?! <3 the subtle hanchul here is awesome beautiful <3

heechul still believes that he'll become a professional writer one of these days, that someone will take one look at him and know, so he keeps all his fairytales in his bottom drawer instead of socks.

and hankyung, hankyung is there because of heechul.

omg i love your hanchul so much <3~ and heechul with the fairytales was and is always my love~~

the whole third paragraph is love, idk.. I could quote anything because hasjhdkfgf I LOVE (isn't there any word that surpasses 'love'?! >ö<) how you describe heechul and hanchul and asdkjfh ( ... )

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fabriclies September 28 2009, 02:28:38 UTC
lol, honestly, i have three projects that i'm supposed to present in class that are due tomorrow but i'm not even close to being done and i just really want to sleep but i'm here instead because i feel so guilty ;-;

heechul and the whole him writing fairytales thing just adds onto my love for him. if it weren't for the fact that i adore hyukjae so much, heechul would top my charts for everything ): you're still so ridiculous about flattering me every time i write; i don't deserve it. and i need to write something for you, gah.

don't envy me, really. there's nothing here to envy. so maybe i write okay every now and then. you're beautiful in your own way and anyone can see that you're beyond sweet. belial, won't you believe me when i say you're perfect the way you are

i should be saying that to you. i'm stressed and sick and soso tired but none of that matters. you should get more sleep for me, because sleeping when your exhausted doesn't cut it. i hope you have a good day with classes. i love, love you ♥

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dongbangsuju20 September 28 2009, 12:52:45 UTC
aw, don't feel guilty, you have no reason for it <3
it's better when you sleep more and prepare a bit for school, I understand it, it's okay ♥
*huggles*
don't try too hard, kay?! óò

haha, same here.. just that heechul IS the top for me <3 just because he is special, otherwise it would change between him and yesung everytime lol
and I am just saying the truth and trying to convey my feelings to you ^-^. you deserve it and much much more than this <3. you deserve every happiness and compliments in this world <3 you deserve more sleep and more times, gorgeous good feelings and less work. you deserve everything and more. so never ever say again you don't deserve something.
and you don't have to write something for me, because everytime I read your writings I already feel gifted. to be able to read it.

it isssss, don't deny it!
you're too nice for me .-.
/flattered
though it's not true~~

thank you darling, as always you accomplish to make me feel better loved(and no, I am not perfect, in no kind of way I am nearly perfect or ( ... )

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keychains September 25 2009, 06:49:18 UTC
WE'RE GOING TO PRETEND THAT I CAME FIRST.

but nhi skdajl god why are you so gooooooooooood?? sdkjal. i friggin akjsdlkja loved this oh my god you silly girl.

he thought about how to make that chinese boy stutter and forget everything he learned in his korean classes.
I WAS ALMOST CRYING HERE KSDJLAK THAT IS SO EFFING SWEET AND SKJDLA UGH SO HEECHUL.

and i love that heechul dreams about flying and asjdkl kangin and kibum as the other 2/3 of his idiot friends omg lol'ing everywhere, thanks.

wide awake with their legs dangling off the ground like they really could fly.
i think i reread that line like- 298310928 tims, it made me 'awwwwwwwww' out loud, for real.

and lajsdlk i am so glad we debuted and askjda i am so glad i'm writing with you and i love you forever and ever and ever and ever, okay?

HAPPY DEBUT, CHUN~! ♥♥♥♥♥

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fabriclies September 26 2009, 15:52:01 UTC
I'M SO SURPRISED BY THE AMOUNT OF COMMENTS, I DON'T KNOW WHERE TO START ;___;

a silly girl for writing things like thiss. omg mikky, omg, i love you so much and i love skyglazed and i'm happy that i'm going to get fics from you weekly.

YOU'RE SUCH A SOFTIE /squishes & lol, i kind of love putting hanchul and those two together, idky. because kihanchuljay previous apartment arrangement and i don't write jay and kangin and heechul are like #. /didn't make sense.

but anyways! omg mikky, i blame you for me writing this, you inspiration you. just talking to you helps me produce fic that doesn't make you want to gag, lmfao. thank you forever for being genius and you know i love you always and forever and forever and infinity plus one and ever. you're brilliant, we had a good debut, and
'WE'RE GOING TO BE STARS,' JAE~! ♥♥♥♥♥♥

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prototypic September 25 2009, 07:28:39 UTC
you're a crazily talented writer, omg. ilu so hard ♥ i want to quote everything but jsdfl that'd be too long and just -- and hankyung, hankyung is there because of heechul, you're amazing.

congratulations on your debut :)

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fabriclies September 26 2009, 16:03:09 UTC
i'll believe that when you start believing that you are, you more so crazily talented writer, you. you're so beautiful, to me~ ♪

thank you so much, for always being there kaye. i love you ♥

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prototypic September 26 2009, 16:08:59 UTC
snorting. how can i believe something that isn't trueeee. i love you.

come back from your hiatus soon, okay ):

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fabriclies September 26 2009, 16:52:34 UTC
eyes colored a tint of melancholy, heart aching with how heartbreakingly perfect everything is. you're too beautiful, for me~ ♫

maybe in like another week i'll start posting again ): i'll check your journal for updates though :D

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katsudono September 25 2009, 08:01:58 UTC
:/ so...bittersweet? :| idk, not sad, but not completely sweet either, and definitely wonderful. :)

I love your writing style:

they could've easily been strangers but heechul liked the way hankyung laughed, like handpicked flowers from a first love.

and I just love your descriptions. :) They're so unique and give a perfect image. ♥

HAPPY DEBUT! :D

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fabriclies September 26 2009, 16:27:39 UTC
it is, isn't it? lol, this whole thing was a little bit rushed but i'm glad you still liked reading it. :D

hon, you're gonna make me blush. thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment.

HAPPY DAY AFTER DEBUT!!! :D :D /bricked ♥

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puchu_pucha September 25 2009, 08:42:12 UTC
and hankyung, hankyung is there because of heechul.
~~~> my favourite line <33333333333

It was beautifully written BB~~~Awwwww, I can feel their strong bond here

The feeling wasn't be described clearly but I love that vague feeling, vague but touched me deep inside

Good job BB~~~*give you a bunch of flowers*

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fabriclies September 26 2009, 16:32:16 UTC
awwh, thank you. i'm glad you felt something while reading this, it's always what i aim to do. (: /flattered. thank you for reading, and the internet flowers, they're awfully pretty 8D ♥

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