Drabble - "Now Sleeps the Swann"

Apr 21, 2010 14:22

The world above and the world below, separated by the glassy surface of the sea; in this place beyond the edge, where there is neither wind nor tide, and the Pearl coasts through stagnant waters, she sleeps.

Dreams of her father - gone now, lost to the deep. Would he be alive still, if she’d filled the role he’d wanted for her?

Visions of Will - his ( Read more... )

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djarum99 April 21 2010, 22:50:06 UTC
Ooooh! Thank you so, so much!

Worn raw, and in need of an absolution that would not come, she is haunted by the storm plaguing her soul

Absolutely gorgeous, every line, and such an apt description of what I imagine her state of mind to be at that point in AWE. I'd love to read another POTC fic from you with character interaction :-)

This was a lovely drabble, and a most generous birthday gift ♥

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skybound2 April 22 2010, 14:17:42 UTC
Oh, thank you! I'm really glad you liked. And this definitely has put me in the mood to delve into these guys a bit, so I may have to give another piece a go :-)

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jessswann January 14 2011, 17:20:51 UTC
Beautiful, I like the description of Lizzie's feeling ( dream and nigthmare) very well done.
The last sentence is absolutly fantastic

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skybound2 January 14 2011, 18:12:50 UTC
Thank you very much!

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skybound2 January 15 2011, 03:20:44 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked :-)

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