Fic: Various short pieces

[sky_so_blu]

Title: Various short pieces
Author: Sky
Pairing: GTOP
Rating:
A/N: These are just a few drabbles which may develop into longer fics, but I wanted to get some feedback first? :D Each is based or linked to the prompts there. Will post more soon hopefully.

Waiting

Jiyong knew that whatever he did wouldn’t matter because Seunghyun would always be there

Comments

[dbsk_jaeho]

Spot! Wahehe.

I like 4 pints! (:

[sky_so_blu]

Not-actually-drunk-Top is fun to play with haha~
Glad you liked it!

[dbsk_jaeho]

Hehe he's sweet!! HAHA All the cuddling! (:

[sky_so_blu]

I know, hey? He's such a dork <3
Cuddles make me feel happy haha! I think writing angst would fail terribly :S

[youkoyugi]

uah~ rush 4 pints and summer rolling by are cute~ they all are but i would love to see more of those ^___^'

ne unnie, i wanna say : i really love your writing so much!! i've read all your stories~ ^///^

[sky_so_blu]

Ok! I shall experiment with those further :DD

Aww thank you! You make me feel warm and fuzzy inside <3

[youkoyugi]

yay~ haha, they seem to be pretty popular too~ ^__^

haha, i'm all about warm and fuzzy *huggles*

unnie HWAITING~

[littletsuki]

Waiting sounds interesting, but I feel a little bad about the fact that TOP is the only one who cares about GD. I'm all about the OT5 love and care, so unless this is an AU, and the other boys are not there, I think it'd be a pretty painful fic to read.

Leaves
I guess you meant to write "not because...but because"? I think it's a sweet image (I can see them walking in the park with their fall clothes on), but I don't know how you would be able to expand that into something larger...A challenge? Then again, it would be a great scene in a longer fic, with a different focus...Did that make sense????

Rush is..hm..I don't know. I think it has potential to be good, but at the same time, I feel like it's a premise that has been done a few times already. Maybe if there's some kind of twist, or it's crack or something totally unexpected.

Pretty I like this one, but I wonder if "pretty" is an appropriate adjective for Seunghyun. Personally, I think "handsome" would be much better; after all, TOP is probably the manliest looking member of

[sky_so_blu]

Oh wow! Thanks a heap for the detailed feedback. You are love ^-^

In reply,
For Waiting I was thinking of making it an AU actually, but I think I got the message across wrongly. I was just saying that our dear Top has a larger focus on Bong than the others do, if that makes sense. I guess I should've have ninja mentions of the other three haha!
Challenges are good :) But I don't really want to expand on it; there's just something about it that I think would be better if it remained short & sweet.
I think there's a few fics out there that are similar to Rush & I'll never be able to compare to those :S
To tell you the truth, Pretty was written from Bong's POV just because I wrote too many from Top's. Although I think it could be plausible because Jiyong can be plain weird sometimes <3

[littletsuki]

♥♥ I'm glad to help~

Now that you mention about Jiyong's weird perception, I think pretty would be pretty interesting to read about. I think the word usage would all give the readers a "!??????" how is TOP pretty?, but then Jiyong could explain all the ways he finds him pretty. :sparkle:

I think that rush is good as it is. Same with leaves.

about the Ice cream cake drabble: I don't know how Jiyong was being sulky around cakes and his band together in one setting! Maybe he really wanted to see those CG snowmen....Or Top was being a bitch to him :(

[sky_so_blu]

<3 :D

I love to be in Jiyong's head ::evil grin::

Perhaps it was only my warped perception then. I haven't watch the BR video in a while, but it was something that just struck me? I love the idea of Bong being sulky around cakes - what did they ever do to him?! haha!!

[mugimugul]

ehhh i like them all!!!
haha its hard to choose!!!!
i think they'd all be very gd (and cute n sweet!!!)!!!
^^

[sky_so_blu]

Aww thank you!!
I have a few in mind to continue, so I hope you'll like those too!
<3

[mugimugul]

hehe im sure i will love it!!!
=]
i'm pretty sure ive read all your GTOP fics!~ You're a good writer!!! very good writer!!!
so i know i will love those that you continue lol!~

^^

[trickling_sand]

Thank you ^^

Short and sweet!! Love them all >33

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[trickling_sand]

I keep forgetting that putting a [less than] sign gets rid of all comments thereafter...^^!

Nevermind, just to let you know that all of your fics are much loved ^^

Having said that, 'Leaves' and '4 Pints' have got to be my favourites!

'Leaves' - 1 falling leaf for 1 Happy day, right? Somehow, this one really strikes a cord with me...maybe because I also do that in the autumn hehe ;)! I never have anyone loving the leaves just because of my smile though - am jealous!!! ;p!!

'4 Pints' - This..this...this -arghhhhh! I LOVE IT!!!! hehe

Sorry, I'm probably not making much sense (not that I normally am ^^!) but thank you, is what I want to say ^0^!!

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[sky_so_blu]

I do that too sometimes! And then I wonder where my comment goes. Haha~

Aw, thank you for your lovely comments <3

Leaves makes me want to hug them because they're just so.. together! Gah, I'm jealous too ^-^

And again, thanks for reading! :D