Title: Various short pieces
Author: Sky
Pairing: GTOP
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A/N: These are just a few drabbles which may develop into longer fics, but I wanted to get some feedback first? :D Each is based or linked to the prompts there. Will post more soon hopefully.
Waiting
Jiyong knew that whatever he did wouldn’t matter because Seunghyun would always be there
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I like 4 pints! (:
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Glad you liked it!
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Cuddles make me feel happy haha! I think writing angst would fail terribly :S
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ne unnie, i wanna say : i really love your writing so much!! i've read all your stories~ ^///^
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Aww thank you! You make me feel warm and fuzzy inside <3
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haha, i'm all about warm and fuzzy *huggles*
unnie HWAITING~
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Leaves
I guess you meant to write "not because...but because"? I think it's a sweet image (I can see them walking in the park with their fall clothes on), but I don't know how you would be able to expand that into something larger...A challenge? Then again, it would be a great scene in a longer fic, with a different focus...Did that make sense????
Rush is..hm..I don't know. I think it has potential to be good, but at the same time, I feel like it's a premise that has been done a few times already. Maybe if there's some kind of twist, or it's crack or something totally unexpected.
Pretty I like this one, but I wonder if "pretty" is an appropriate adjective for Seunghyun. Personally, I think "handsome" would be much better; after all, TOP is probably the manliest looking member of ( ... )
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In reply,
For Waiting I was thinking of making it an AU actually, but I think I got the message across wrongly. I was just saying that our dear Top has a larger focus on Bong than the others do, if that makes sense. I guess I should've have ninja mentions of the other three haha!
Challenges are good :) But I don't really want to expand on it; there's just something about it that I think would be better if it remained short & sweet.
I think there's a few fics out there that are similar to Rush & I'll never be able to compare to those :S
To tell you the truth, Pretty was written from Bong's POV just because I wrote too many from Top's. Although I think it could be plausible because Jiyong can be plain weird sometimes <3 ( ... )
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Now that you mention about Jiyong's weird perception, I think pretty would be pretty interesting to read about. I think the word usage would all give the readers a "!??????" how is TOP pretty?, but then Jiyong could explain all the ways he finds him pretty. :sparkle:
I think that rush is good as it is. Same with leaves.
about the Ice cream cake drabble: I don't know how Jiyong was being sulky around cakes and his band together in one setting! Maybe he really wanted to see those CG snowmen....Or Top was being a bitch to him :(
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I love to be in Jiyong's head ::evil grin::
Perhaps it was only my warped perception then. I haven't watch the BR video in a while, but it was something that just struck me? I love the idea of Bong being sulky around cakes - what did they ever do to him?! haha!!
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haha its hard to choose!!!!
i think they'd all be very gd (and cute n sweet!!!)!!!
^^
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I have a few in mind to continue, so I hope you'll like those too!
<3
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i'm pretty sure ive read all your GTOP fics!~ You're a good writer!!! very good writer!!!
so i know i will love those that you continue lol!~
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Short and sweet!! Love them all >33
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Nevermind, just to let you know that all of your fics are much loved ^^
Having said that, 'Leaves' and '4 Pints' have got to be my favourites!
'Leaves' - 1 falling leaf for 1 Happy day, right? Somehow, this one really strikes a cord with me...maybe because I also do that in the autumn hehe ;)! I never have anyone loving the leaves just because of my smile though - am jealous!!! ;p!!
'4 Pints' - This..this...this -arghhhhh! I LOVE IT!!!! hehe
Sorry, I'm probably not making much sense (not that I normally am ^^!) but thank you, is what I want to say ^0^!!
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Aw, thank you for your lovely comments <3
Leaves makes me want to hug them because they're just so.. together! Gah, I'm jealous too ^-^
And again, thanks for reading! :D
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