That's What You Get - Part Two

[sky_dark]

Title: Thats What You Get
Rathing: R, Ed has anger management issues
Pairing: Ling/Ed
Summary: Rascally Xingian Royalty meets other royalty and Ed is amused.

Comments

[tinyredpencil]

So I've actually never read anything that's primarily Ling/Ed before. In fact, the closest to it was your TARM:SET/BLTA/LAT Ling, and his infatuation with that Ed.

But I am so reading this. You wrote it, so I'm reading it. It's hilarious so far, especially the first chapter, which stupidly I did not comment on. My favorite part of chapter two: Ling sweeping Ed off his feet (literally!), and making him all speechless for a minute. So abrupt to both of them, and just, perfect.

You might just be converting me to this shippage. We shall see.

Also.... working on anything else???? *cough* *snort* *is-not-at-all-subtle* The mini-Mustang in my brain is a little jealous of Ling....

Whatever it is you're working on, please keep writin' the awesome.

[sky_dark]

converting you to Ling/Ed you say? Now why would I do that? *rubs hands together, chuckles evilly*

(yes, I am working on something else)

Thanks for reading!

[baka_deshi]

"Ok, you're excused," Ed said, then shut the door anyways, because he just didn't feel like fucking around with the locals.

This is still slaying me XD

[sky_dark]

Ed's version of manners leave a lot to be desired XD

[straightcogar]

wahahahahahaha! Oh this is fantastic! This is delicious.

[sky_dark]

Thanks! <3333

[raceulfson]

I love this so. My fav line: "Was it something I'm going to need to remember for say, oh, a court hearing?" Ed ventured."

I can never tell what your Ling is thinking, either. I am waiting for the joke to be revealed... or for Mustang to deal with an international love triangle.

[sky_dark]

I can never tell what Ling is thinking either to be honest XD I'm glad you're enjoying it, thanks for reading! <3

[crazyloststar]

/rolling

XD

[sky_dark]

<3333 ILU!