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sky_dark

Better Living Through Alchemy - Chapter 20, Part One

Jul 10, 2006 18:54

Title: Better Living Through Alchemy - Chapter 20, Part One
Pairing: Roy/Ed
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: None
Special Guest Beta: brinylon, much thanks and love!

( Vacation, Meant to be spent alone )

Comments 31

edo_fangirl July 11 2006, 01:35:36 UTC

*falls to the ground and worships Sky* What can I do to get you to continue writing BLTA for, oh, forever? *sighs happily* I'll do anything!!

It was a loooooong day at work, and this is the BEST possible thing to find in my inbox when I came home. XD Edward Elric - relaxed, stretching and dancing for Roy (sans all clothing, of course!!) was some of the best imagery to date. Though I'll have you know that trying to discretely read this as my parents (both of whom are ministers) kept moving around me was excruciating!!! XP

So an engagement huh? It's about damn time!! *does the Fangirl Happy Dance (TM)*

*races off happily to part two*

review anonymous July 11 2006, 03:08:12 UTC

Who cares about a term paper due tomorrow morning. This is so much more important. It was worth the wait! Thank you!

Re: review sky_dark July 11 2006, 22:04:46 UTC

ACK! Do your term paper! XD

amberunicorn July 11 2006, 03:11:51 UTC

yay!!! you write, I joygasm...thank you, thank you, thank you.This is the best story evah, glomps u.

sky_dark July 11 2006, 22:05:03 UTC

I'm glad you're enjoying it! =D

romyra July 11 2006, 03:27:10 UTC

“You are treating me, to this big steak,” Ed said, pointing. “It comes with a potato, that's fancy enough for me.

**Guffaw** I nearly died when I read this....you have Ed's voice down pat and I adore the Roy/Ed interaction.

You look a bit flabby and under defined. You're also an amazing shade of fish belly white.”

Roy's mouth pulled down on the sides.

“That's really cruel, here I've done nothing but drool over you for the past half hour and you think I'm flabby.”

Ed looked like he was on the verge of snickering.

“Don't...don't pout,” he got out before bursting into giggles he tried to smother with his automail hand.

This part right here ***quoted above** killed me...

bamberbabe88 July 11 2006, 03:59:20 UTC

WOW! yep that covers it "WOW!" oh yeah and LOOOOOOOOVed it. can't wait to read the rest of it.

they got engaged. YEAH! that's so sweet especially how Ed reacted to Roy proposing. ^_^

"What did you think we'd be doing? Hanging around in the cabin fucking all day? Wait, don't answer that."

that sounds so like Ed to make it some type of sporting event and it sounds like Roy to make just about laying around and making love to Ed.

i like how you ended this part of the chapter can't wait to read the next part, but i have to wait until tomorrow because my mom won't let me use MY computer after 12:00. did i mention that it was MINE. well anyway can't wait to see what other fun things they do on their vacation