[Fic] Wither

[sky_dark]

Title: Wither
Author: sky_dark
Genre: Het
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Ed/Gracia
Spoilers: Spoilers for Episode 25
Word Count: 3069 (highly unbeta'd)
Notes: Written for fma_fuh_q

Comments

[blindeadmcjones]

Awesome. GraciaxEd is the sort of pairing I'd normally avoid, but you wrote it in a very gentle and sensitive way.

"They went into the darkness, where there was a bed and a door. Yes, it needed to be behind a door because for all it's not wrongness, it still wasn't right."

I love those lines for some reason. Just the simplicity of it, the childish way of speaking. Like Ed, who's normally so grown up, has been reduced to someone very small. Lovely piece. ^^

[sky_dark]

thanks, I really appreciate it =D

[momoiro_usagi]

Wow! Absolutely amazing! ^____^ Every word of this was inspired and brilliant, and your descriptions are so powerful! ^^ There are a few little typos here and there, but overall, very nice job!

I also have to thank you, hun...you are the only person in this community who commented on my story, and I am so grateful that you took the time to do that! :) And now that I know what a wonderful writer you are, I feel even prouder that you enjoyed my story! ^^

[sky_dark]

Well thanks, I'm glad you liked it =D I thought the Noa story was beautiful, I really did. She's a hard one to write and not one of the popular characters, you really rose to the challenge =)

[momoiro_usagi]

Awwww, thanks! ^_______^

And I'll be looking forward to reading more from you soon! (Do you have any other claims for this month?)

[sky_dark]

Thanks! =D (No, I only took one, I have a few other things I had to do this month =) )

[xeviscerax]

You never cease to get a rise from my eyebrow, and yet, everything invariably makes sense at the end of it all. How do you do that? Can you teach me?

Nicely done. Ed + his guilt = OTP

[sky_dark]

thanks! I'm glad you liked it, any making sense is purely by accident XD

[anonymous]

Once again, wow. You are one of the few fanfic authors worth reading. I was surfing yesterday, noting you haven't updated anything, and couldn't find any good fanfiction. Then you leave us this little gem. Thank you. It's just sooo weird seeing a het Ed from you though, I'm going to have to get used to it.

[sky_dark]

Thank you ver much, I'm glad you enjoyed it =)

[sky_dark]

don't get to use to the het, I don't do it often XD

[_acerbitas_]

Wow. I...don't have words for this story. That was simply awe-inspiring. Beautiful work, with a sort of helpless sadness that brought it to painful life. I'm so amazed. Beautiful

[sky_dark]

Thank you very much =)