100 LaviYu Themes: 1/100

Oct 07, 2009 00:30

Disclaimer: I own nothing. Except the plot

A/N: another one of my ingenius campaigns to get my brain working again. I've been slacking way too much and I lost the ability to write ever since the mid August drama. If I'm ever going to do anything productive for the kink meme, better to start now.

1. IntroductionHis first mission. With a partner ( Read more... )

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dementiamorphea October 6 2009, 17:17:53 UTC
Awwww. I like this. : D Great story, now keep those themes coming! : D

Criticism: You forgot a dot after the last sentence.

XD

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sky_ciel October 7 2009, 07:47:33 UTC
Will do

Criticism comment: WHAAAAT??? D8 *amends* there 8D Dot added XD

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Kuro anonymous October 7 2009, 21:18:55 UTC
I think it was the last line that did it for me (it has to be the Rinali mention, I am loving her more and more!!) XDDD You used this common idea/theme that has been redone a billion times and turned it into something very refreshing ;)

Much love from me~ Can't wait for you to get your RK feel back! V

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Re: Kuro sky_ciel October 8 2009, 03:39:51 UTC
because we all know how Lenalee is sometimes as observant as Lavi himself 8D yes, I love to use Lenalee too XD

I know XD I'm writing the 2nd theme now

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fantasia0829 October 8 2009, 03:14:02 UTC
I love how you closed this introduction.

Keep writing this series! :)

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sky_ciel October 8 2009, 03:41:56 UTC
XP sure~

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