"never close enough"

Nov 01, 2010 05:31


Even with his cheek rubbing, stroking ever so pleadingly on his thigh, even that was not close enough.

He understood, didn’t he? Ciel could relate to the types of experiences he had been through better than anyone else imaginable. He had seen the flames that had swirled about, consuming and eating away buildings until all that was left was a deep, ( Read more... )

character: alois trancy, character: ciel phantomhive, fandom: kuroshitsuji, fanfiction, character: claude faustus

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b_what November 1 2010, 15:27:00 UTC
This one of the best things i've ever read since it's so intense and together with the episode, makes things even more fierce.
I loved your writing style and how you worked in this with the whole atmosphere built and the focus you give to their eyes and what they express is just wonderful.

Couldn't love Claude or Alois more even with all this pain :')

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skullster November 1 2010, 21:20:36 UTC
Thank you so much for the praise, I really appreciate your comment. <3 I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. c:

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neocloud9 November 1 2010, 15:46:21 UTC
Ohhh, it hurts. :C

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skullster November 1 2010, 21:21:16 UTC
(/pets) :'c

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amanuensis1 November 3 2010, 09:17:01 UTC
I love those "moments that stretch" within canon, the need to feel exactly what was felt and meant in that moment. I could never have written this one because it's so heartbreaking! I'm glad you did! ^_^

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skullster November 3 2010, 09:35:00 UTC
I feel the exact same way about that and it's usually those types of fanfiction that get to me the most. It was a pleasure writing this and capturing that moment. Thank you, I'm glad you're glad I wrote it. <3

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