Comments | skullchi: Mary and Her Sunshine Boys

skullchi

Mary and Her Sunshine Boys

Oct 12, 2010 15:41

MARY AND HER SUNSHINE BOYS;; PG-13

( each dig repeating the words, you, him, mine, ours. )

group: shinee, status: one-shot, pairing: jessica/minho, status: complete, rating: pg-13, group: girls' generation

Comments 12

jongmalai October 13 2010, 01:05:09 UTC

what oh my lord omg more moremore shit I need to organize coherent thought fuck this was great.

skullchi October 13 2010, 05:16:29 UTC

ooh someone read it hehehe <3

ty!!! <333

aoza October 13 2010, 09:09:47 UTC

........ omg. intense. 8DDDD

skullchi October 15 2010, 07:13:26 UTC

dorox October 13 2010, 10:57:21 UTC

I don't know if I'm making it more difficult than it should be, but I get this kind of vibes where nothing is as it seems? Something hidden?
Okay, maybe I just don't get it. XDDDD~
Anyway, I liked it. ♥

skullchi October 15 2010, 07:14:14 UTC

haha i was trying to be vague and let some parts be open for the reader to decide what happened...can i ask what you think is hidden/confusing? =)

but ty!

dorox October 15 2010, 10:31:37 UTC

Probably the parts where it's vague XD~
But now that I know it's rather open to the reader...
it's alright XD

ohsugarandsalt October 14 2010, 06:30:27 UTC

I love your way with language.It's so descriptive. I'm not going to lie, I was left scratching my head the first time I read it.

I also really love your title, may I ask how you decided on it? Or whether there's a meaning behind it?

skullchi October 15 2010, 07:15:58 UTC

i was trying to be vague (maybe too much) so i think it's fitting you scratched your head. i wonder what got you though?

and about the title - idk it has no meaning at all, it just came to me after i finished writing. i thought it sort of suited the situation.

idk but ty for reading!

lolly1588 October 24 2010, 19:49:53 UTC

its all written in broken parts
yet it all link somehow
but i do get the sense that minho saved jessica and jonghyun from something horrible.
and they seem more like lovers here as compare to the jong.
can totally picture this off some streets
well that's all i gather .

Nice try at being vague

skullchi January 10 2011, 07:05:15 UTC

ty for reading! =)))