Fic: Too Good To Be True, NC-17

[belmanoir]

x-posted to dresdenslash

Title: Too Good To Be True
Author: belmanoir
Fandom: The Dresden Files, TV-verse.
Pairing: Harry/Bob
Rating: NC-17
Summary: It's embarrassing to still have a crush on your teacher twenty-five years later.
Warnings: Spoilers for the show through 1x10, "What About Bob?"
Word Count: 5,251
Notes: Unbeta'd, because none of my friends are in this

Comments

[ebonlock]

Ok you managed to work in some of the best Harry/Bob banter I've read to date, incredible insights into both Harry and Bob's psyches, several full on tens on the Snark-o-meter, one of the hottest mutual masturbation scenes it's been my pleasure to come across (no pun intended), and you work in one of my now all time favorite historical wonk jokes ever:

"Well, I assumed you were a Saxon, Bob, not an albino."

I'm not sure I'll ever need anything from a fic again, you've pretty much covered it in this one. Guess I can stop reading now...unless you'll give us more of your lovely fic soon! ;)

[belmanoir]

Seriously, how fake does his hair look? But given that he IS a saxon, i'd assume he was already blond, or at least light-haired, so why dye?

Anyway, thank you so much for your lovely comments, I am a praise junkie. I'm glad the fic did it for you. =)

[ebonlock]

LOL, hey you recognized the icon, you're the first one so far :) I still want to grow up to be Kim Novack but maybe that's just me. And I happen to own a Siamese named Pyewacket so it works for me on a variety of levels :)

[phoenix64]

*fans self* Holy cow. You did such a good job with their voices, and it was so sweet and hot and kinda believable. And hot. Also, your imagining of what Bob's orgasm would be like was just incredible - I bet it would be beautiful.

Did I say it was hot?

[belmanoir]

aw, thank you! and yeah, i wish this could actually happen on the show so we could SEE bob turn into fireworks.

...and for other reasons too, obviously, but i really love how they do his manifestation, visually. love it love it love it. when that table went through him and he, like, fluttered, i was like, WHOA THAT WAS SO COOL MUST REWIND.

thanks again for the comments! i'm glad you liked it.

[havlockvetinari]

*gah*
Bob!Porn
*melts into a puddle of goo*
*will say more when coherency returns*
which because of the many-faceted awesomeness of the fic could be a while

[belmanoir]

squee! people like my fic!

also, i love your icon.

[havlockvetinari]

*snerk* I need to figure out a way to put ~Bob at the bottom of the note.

Ok. Somewhat coherant:
Loved...everything. The back-and-forth, Bob's disbelief, Bob's light display (XD) My favorite bit though...that'd have to be how they both have little bondage kicks of thier own. XD Harry with getting tied up and Bob with the geas *fans self*

Looking forward to more. Possibly a sequel? Harry getting to fuck Bob into the mattress? *needs a cold shower...antartic cold*
Or even just another fic.
^_^

[belmanoir]

heh. usually once i write a happy ending, i'm done with a fic, so no sequel. but i have come to terms with my identity as a fanfic writer this week and i am confident there will be other fics---and i suspect a number of them will feature kinkiness and geases (?---ok, wikipedia says the plural is geasa).

[m_j_]

<3 <3 <3.

<3 you.

<3 teh Bobness.

More please?

That is all.

[belmanoir]

<3 feedback! glad you liked.

[moiraithanatoio]

That was absolutely fantastic. It was really enjoyable in that the emotional background felt so in character while the porn was so incredibly hot.

bad-assed-necromancer-in-distress That line would make a great icon....

[belmanoir]

thank you! for me emotional background is really important to the hotness of porn so i'm glad this worked for you. and hmm...there may have to be icons!

[moiraithanatoio]

I've saved a copy of this to my hard drive. It may expand later, but really good Harry/Bob is still hard to find.

[belmanoir]

aw, iconage! i am so flattered. it IS a fairly new fandom so i am sure there will be lots more soon, i've been really enjoying what's been posted so far there just isn't ENOUGH!