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Aug 06, 2009 15:55

Title: The danger of wanting
Author: miniaya
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Bob/Harry
Book/TV-Verse: TV
Warnings: Angst!!! Also, not beta'd
Disclaimer: Don't own them... wish I did though. ;)
Word Count: 398
Authors notes: This was inspired by Harlan Ellison's work entitled 'The Creation of Water', and by the monthly challenge word: Transition

The danger of wanting )

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madame_fifi August 6 2009, 22:32:32 UTC
Ooh, I liked this!
Sexy but not porntastic and I'm pretty sure I must be a bit sadistic because I liked the down note at the end XD

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miniaya August 6 2009, 22:43:43 UTC
YAY! I'm glad you liked it! *^_^*
Normally I like sugarcoated Happy endings... but it's been overcast this past week and it put me in a more "dramatic" mood. *laughs* I'm such a dork. Thanks for the comment, it made me smile! :D

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I need to get a fandom icon madame_fifi August 7 2009, 09:08:55 UTC
Happy endings are good and I usually like them but I think that sometimes, especially with a drabble, a more moody ending is preferable =3

Glad I made you smile =D

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wow sasunaru6 August 11 2009, 02:54:37 UTC
I'm normally not fond of mini fics because there never written well but this was just fantastic plenty of information to give you a visual and yet not too much so it leaves the rest to your imagination. I have to say this is very well written! Great job!

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Re: wow miniaya August 11 2009, 05:46:27 UTC
Thank you very much for the complement! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

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day221b August 12 2009, 01:30:27 UTC
Lovely. The first bit, while completely PWP, expressed an unspoken tenderness throughout which made the erotic images in your ficlet all the more powerful for me.

The last bit speaks of a much larger story that begs to be explored and (hopefully) resolved. ;)

My only complaint is that it is far too short. Bravo! I hope to read more of your work in the future.

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miniaya August 12 2009, 18:57:41 UTC
*does the happy dance* Thank you for the complements!:D You just brightened my day tenfold. As for ever getting this resolved...mmm... I haven't really given it much thought actually. Perhaps something will come to me because I do want to keep writing. :D
p.s.- your icon is Love.

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