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Compulsion 18

Mar 10, 2008 23:01

Title: Compulsion part 18
Author: Edana ni Emer
Universe: TV
Pairing: Harry/OC previously, but for now some nice tasty H/B.
Rating: NC-17 for smut.
Warnings: Inadvertent voyuerism, cranky Wardens, and your general smack-talking. Oh, and rimming.
Word Count: 5804Summary: Sometimes you don't know your own mind. Sometimes somebody wants to make ( Read more... )

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Comments 12

ah ksl2025 March 11 2008, 10:59:14 UTC

my weekly fix. Sigh. So good.

The sex...as always, so incredibly hot. I have to admit, rimming wans't something I'd given much thought to in terms of erotic, but man...that was hot. :-)

The glasses---just perfect. Nicely reinforcing Bob's mortality, and how much attention Harry pays to him. Finding the glasses a turn on was a nice little detial too.

Morgan....I almost like him. :-) He's a good man, but a bit stubborn in his point of view. And just a bit naive. Like seeing Bob educate him just a little on the ways of the world, or more accurately, the council.

Re: ah edana_ni_emer March 11 2008, 23:50:53 UTC

Then thing about Morgan is that he is very slow to trust, but when he does, it is Absolute. Unfortunately for him... he's chosen to place his trust in Mai (who doesn't deserve it nearly as much as he thinks she does), and by extension the Council. He'll learn that, someday, and how he handles it will be the making or breaking of him.

And glasses!kink is always fun. ;-) While Bob adores being mortal again so he can be with Harry, there are a few things he's not quite so huge a fan of. But that's only natural.

Rimming isn't generally one of my kinks, but Harry's turned out to be so relentlessly oral, in my head, that I couldn't resist. :-) More accurately, he decided to do it, and I got hauled along for the ride.

anderov March 11 2008, 13:12:37 UTC

I'd noted the foreshadowing of glasses!kink back in IHOP... I was terribly afraid you'd forgotten, or changed your mind, or that I'd have to wait for one of the (eagerly anticipated) sequels you mentioned.

Quite glad to have my fears proven unfounded. Mmm, glasses!kink. Bravo! ^_^

edana_ni_emer March 11 2008, 23:52:28 UTC

Just wait until the sequels, where he's gotten around to growing his hair out long enough to go in a ponytail, and has a goatee. Harry is quite overcome with lust. ;-)

anderov March 12 2008, 02:28:24 UTC

Mm.. sounds like a party. I'll be holding you to that ^_-

(Although I must admit, while I'm generally in favour of both long hair and goatees, I'm having a hard time picturing either on Bob. I have seen the photos of TM with longer (than Bob's) hair and a full beard, and I definately prefer Bob's look... Something to play with in my mind, I suppose =D)

anderov March 12 2008, 17:23:12 UTC

(Sorry, that was me up there)

seek_verum March 11 2008, 15:10:50 UTC

It's confusing to dislike Morgan and feel sorry for him at the same time...

But on a more important note: BOB IN GLASSES!!! :)

edana_ni_emer March 11 2008, 23:53:26 UTC

He's a good man, sadly. I say sadly because when he finds out what Mai and the Council really get up to, he's not going to be able to forgive them, or forgive himself for what he'll see as his part in it.

Not that I'm foreshadowing for later in this universe or anything. ;-)

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edana_ni_emer March 11 2008, 23:55:11 UTC

Hee! He's so very Javert-y, isn't he? The poor guy.

Don't worry, Harry and Bob will pick up where they left off before all's said and sifted.

And who knows? Maybe there's yet hope for Morgan and Harry to be friends, if Morgan can ever forgive Harry for being human.

kirsteena March 12 2008, 11:08:10 UTC

Glasses! Ah yes, one of my favourite kinks =)

Hot, wonderfully written. And lovely insight into Morgan as well.