Comments | skull_boy_love: FIC: A HEART OUT OF TIME PART SIX-B

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FIC: A HEART OUT OF TIME PART SIX-B

Feb 01, 2008 17:18

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beachkid February 2 2008, 06:00:28 UTC

please review your rating for this part, moonchildetoo; 'G or PG' is misleading considering some of the content near the end of this post. ;)

moonchildetoo February 2 2008, 15:54:36 UTC

Oops! Splitting the thing up into chunks, I forget what is where sometimes!

shiplizard February 2 2008, 08:55:14 UTC

I saw Winifride the Evil Bitch coming. How depressing.

Does she really have to suffer just because she's not in the OTP?

moonchildetoo February 2 2008, 15:54:01 UTC

Not because she's not the OTP, but because I chose to write her this way. It's how I dealt with canon declaring that she was Bob's 'great love'. Maybe that was a lie. It's one of many possibilities. Winifride was a sorceress - why should it be okay for Hrothbert to be 'badass', but not her?

saintvic February 6 2008, 22:19:57 UTC

And we start with even more angst here. Although I love the way you balance it with reassurance and the physical relationship. Despite all the pain you still show the Harry/Bob relationship as being strong and loving.

moonchildetoo February 7 2008, 02:01:38 UTC

Thank you so much for all your very appreciated feedback! It's good to know what works or what doesn't. After Part 7, it's all lovely goodstuff, no more angst after that ;-)