Comments | skull_boy_love: Distance, Part Twelve

pinkdoom in skull_boy_love

Distance, Part Twelve

Dec 15, 2007 08:24

Title: Distance, Part Twelve
Author: pinkdoom
Summary: Sometimes it takes a little distance to understand how precious what you have truly is
Rating NC-17 for this part
Word Count: 7,539
Disclaimer: Not mine!! All is property of Jim Butcher, this is for entertainment purposes only.
Warnings: h/c; sexual tension and frustration; wait...yep, it' ( Read more... )

author:pinkdoom, fic:distance, user:pinkdoom, wip, fic, rating:nc17

Comments 11

ohhhhh....my. ksl2025 December 15 2007, 18:33:16 UTC

This was awesome.
Had it all. Little sleepy cuddling. Lot of deliberate groping. little mushy dialog that was so damn sweet and just perfect. And dear god...shower sex. Ah. Lovely, lovely.
Was worth waiting for. :-)

Re: ohhhhh....my. pinkdoom December 15 2007, 22:00:31 UTC

Sorry I didn't get to post yesterday!! Making food for a holiday dinner turned into "fiasco during the making of food for holiday dinner", and it just all went *poof* Argh.

But...yay! Glad you enjoyed. I have a particular kink for shower sex in fic ;) And yes, my mushy dialogue...trust me, it stays pretty mushy, sometimes a little naughty...maybe even a little kinky *grins*

Re: ohhhhh....my. ksl2025 December 16 2007, 00:46:13 UTC

Sorry dinner thing was a cluster. Man. Hate it when what should be simple suddenly becomes a test of my patience and endurance.

Grateful that in spite of all that you still managed to post. :-) Have to tell you, that makes me feel very important. Truly. that you would consider this hobby, and the enjoyment of your audience, a priority is a nice ego stroke.

Re: ohhhhh....my. pinkdoom December 16 2007, 01:31:23 UTC

Absolutely!! Without readers, my fic gets wasted...sure, I could write it just for myself, and honestly, that's a big part of it--pushing myself to see if I can improve my writing with each story, but I LOVE readers. I was soley a fan fic reader for years before I dove into actually writing it, and I remember most the authors who were appreciative of the people who took the time to read and comment, when they could. I *heart* any and all who read my writing dearly, it means a ton to me. Plus, I'm a comment!whore, and I'll readily admit to it ;)

Oh, the dinner thing...it was for my coworkers and even though I wasn't totally in charge of it, I tend to try to help out with whatever I can, so I wound up cooking a bunch of stuff...argh. I'm not the greatest cook in the world, but I do all right. But thank you, I appreciate all your wonderful comments...seeing those after work or after a bad day really helps out :)

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pinkdoom December 16 2007, 17:37:22 UTC

It's a good thing Harry's almost healed, or they'd both probably go nuts.

*laugh* I think they're already well on their way there! ;) They've got more patience than I would have, that's for sure. lol

I know I keep saying this over and over, but every time it's true. I love this fic, and even more so, the author who wrote it. This is the perfect blend of well, everything I always look for in a story, fanfic or published book.

My dear, that is the best compliment I've ever been given on my writing, and I thank you SO much for that. *grins* That means a lot! I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story...sad thing is, there are only two parts to it left. They're of considerable size (I think I'm going to have to break Part 13 into two parts, I doubt LJ will let me post something THAT large, lol).

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pinkdoom December 16 2007, 17:40:50 UTC

Oh wow, I love that phrase, quite pretty! And I'm super glad you're not dying of mush-overdose...I try to keep it realistic without going overboard, because I do think they'd be that tender and caring with each other, but we all know they're more than capable of the hot, hot, rough bang-me-against-the-wall-and-fuck-me kind of stuff as well. Lots of different things I get to write! LOL :)

Again, thank you so much...you SBL'ers are too kind :)

saintvic January 12 2008, 23:57:04 UTC

You know I am torn here between wanting to worship you or keep you locked in my basement and making you write scenes like that all the time. Do you have a preference?

So just in case you didn't read between the lines this was gorgeous. i love how you describe both Harry and Bob but the description of Bob in the show was perfect and I could see it so clearly!

pinkdoom January 13 2008, 00:25:14 UTC

*grins widely* Eep!! If I have to stay locked in the basement, do I get fed and watered and given someone to play with *cough bob and harry cough*? If I get that, I'll be more than happy to oblige! Course, if you worship me than I require a prezzie...and only Bob and Harry fit the bill. Either way, I'm happy! *snickers* Sadly, my poor little fic brain as it stands is a little worn out and stressed out, but I'm going to finish my set of cliche fics at some point, dammit! ;)

*accepts praise like a desert, and gobbles it up* I have this fetish for Bob/Harry shower scenes and that one really had me all excited so I was hoping it would have the same effect...guess it did! YAY!

saintvic January 13 2008, 00:30:30 UTC

Ummmm I could feed and water you - is alcohol and takeaway chinese or indian alright? And you would be allowed to play with Harry and Bob. Well actually if I had them to give away I think I would be playing with them myself. Hope your brain manages to destress soon.

pinkdoom January 13 2008, 00:44:29 UTC

Hee, so long as the alcohol isn't vodka...that stuff does weird things to me. Ooo, chinese and indian! ;) Okay, I can play with them...you may keep them but you have to let them out for a while...and that involves letting ME have them for a bit...deal? *grins wickedly* And yes, the brain will eventually calm down...things just seemed to pile up all at once and my fic got kind of abandoned, but granted..."Distance" was the biggest piece of fan fic I've ever written, so I figure I deserve a bit of a break, eh? *hugs*

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