More light-hearted, this part :) I enjoy writing Bob/Harry banter, it's just too easy to make them pick on each other.
Title: Distance, Part Eleven
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pinkdoomSummary: Sometimes it takes a little distance to understand how precious what you have truly is
Rating Hard R for Eleven
Word Count: 3,137
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Anyway...as with the rest of the story, I am enjoying this part too. Some lovely interaction---lighthearted and yet still fairly deep. More clarification for them as to how they got to the point where they needed to have this conversation in the first place.
And naturally that teasing bit. Just gotta keep upping the ante don't you? Lest you think that a bad thing, let me reassure you..It's not. :-)
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This part was, at first, a little rocky, because I can do angst and I can do smut, but how do you do the in-between, with Harry still hurting and Bob not wanting to hurt him, but you've got those pesky raging libidos? :) Part Twelve should help ease some of the...tension, especially because there's a shower involved ;) And that's helping Harry, right...hot water relaxes the muscles...and then there's Bob in the hot water. I see no problems here! ;)
You better believe I keep upping the ante...that's half the fun! So glad you're enjoying, I love opening my inbox and seeing comments, drastically brightens my day. *hugs*
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You're not weak, sweetie...I remember waiting online for HOURS for the next part of stories that I was completely hooked into. I'm a big dork like that :)
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Yes, yes...recovering!Harry is always good...especially because you know the hormones are going to be held at bay for only so long, and then they're both going to get fucked stupid. That's about the only phrase I can think of that fits ;) They do make love...but it's...well, like I said before, it's 32 pages of pure smut. *does a palms-up* What else can I say? ;)
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and once again I have to say that this was lovely - an even closer connecton for the boys and some wonderfully hot moments.
*Starts counting down until Harry is completely recovered*
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And I know for a FACT that Bob was also counting down until Harry was fully recovered...and had to settle for little touches and whispering naughty things in Harry's ear while he was sleeping! *cackles*
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