Distance, Part Eleven

Dec 13, 2007 08:53

More light-hearted, this part :) I enjoy writing Bob/Harry banter, it's just too easy to make them pick on each other.

Title: Distance, Part Eleven
Author: pinkdoom
Summary: Sometimes it takes a little distance to understand how precious what you have truly is
Rating Hard R for Eleven
Word Count: 3,137
Disclaimer: Not mine!! All is property of ( Read more... )

author:pinkdoom, fic:distance, user:pinkdoom, wip, rating:r, fic

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:-) ksl2025 December 13 2007, 15:26:23 UTC
You are rewarding my bad behavior. Just so you know. I'm sneaking a peek from the office because I'm not good with temptation. Actually, I'm great with it. give in every single time. LOL.

Anyway...as with the rest of the story, I am enjoying this part too. Some lovely interaction---lighthearted and yet still fairly deep. More clarification for them as to how they got to the point where they needed to have this conversation in the first place.

And naturally that teasing bit. Just gotta keep upping the ante don't you? Lest you think that a bad thing, let me reassure you..It's not. :-)

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Re: :-) pinkdoom December 13 2007, 21:02:12 UTC
*sigh* First I'm a bad influence, and now I'm rewarding bad behavior..oh my, shame on me ;) Oh well...there are far worse things you could be doing besides reading gay almost-porn, right? You could be looking at pictures of gay porn at work instead of reading it! *grins*

This part was, at first, a little rocky, because I can do angst and I can do smut, but how do you do the in-between, with Harry still hurting and Bob not wanting to hurt him, but you've got those pesky raging libidos? :) Part Twelve should help ease some of the...tension, especially because there's a shower involved ;) And that's helping Harry, right...hot water relaxes the muscles...and then there's Bob in the hot water. I see no problems here! ;)

You better believe I keep upping the ante...that's half the fun! So glad you're enjoying, I love opening my inbox and seeing comments, drastically brightens my day. *hugs*

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Re: :-) ksl2025 December 13 2007, 23:14:27 UTC
Sooooooo...where's the next part? :-) Or are you going to make me be bad again tomorrow and check while at work? Cause you know I will. I'm consistently weak like that.

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Re: :-) pinkdoom December 14 2007, 13:36:39 UTC
I'm not sure when I'll get Twelve up....I'm just trying to get comments and emails answered this morning, but I might have time to post this afternoon, once I get done cooking for a Christmas dinner :)

You're not weak, sweetie...I remember waiting online for HOURS for the next part of stories that I was completely hooked into. I'm a big dork like that :)

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pinkdoom December 13 2007, 20:59:11 UTC
*hugs* Thank you! :) Yes, more fic...I might not get to post Part Twelve until the day after tomorrow, simply because of time restraints and such. And YAY for copy-paste! Always a good thing ;) Can't wait to see your comments.

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pinkdoom December 14 2007, 13:49:24 UTC
You re-read this part? *dies of fangirl happiness* Thank you!! :)

Yes, yes...recovering!Harry is always good...especially because you know the hormones are going to be held at bay for only so long, and then they're both going to get fucked stupid. That's about the only phrase I can think of that fits ;) They do make love...but it's...well, like I said before, it's 32 pages of pure smut. *does a palms-up* What else can I say? ;)

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saintvic January 12 2008, 23:18:30 UTC
*hugs you*

and once again I have to say that this was lovely - an even closer connecton for the boys and some wonderfully hot moments.

*Starts counting down until Harry is completely recovered*

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pinkdoom January 13 2008, 00:22:10 UTC
*hugs vicfarmer back* Thank you dear! :)

And I know for a FACT that Bob was also counting down until Harry was fully recovered...and had to settle for little touches and whispering naughty things in Harry's ear while he was sleeping! *cackles*

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