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May 31, 2010 22:29

Title: Ten Rings ( Read more... )

gen 1, sid, tony

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tyhyin June 1 2010, 14:29:07 UTC
I think it was the line about there not being a Josh to fuck around with this time.

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gala_apples June 2 2010, 23:37:37 UTC
yeah, normally i'm all about them being in the moment, but this time i wanted a large time span. the word 'ring' is really inspiring.

as for the tony/omc, in sid22, he and tony get married, in sid23, he's got a tattoo over his finger where his wedding ring once was. he's bitter because tony cheated on him and they divorced. and then in sid25, tony wants to be with him again, and it ends neutrally with a maybe.

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daniela_lynx June 1 2010, 12:42:24 UTC
Just a short comment before leaving for Uni: I really, really loved this <333 I wanted you to know that.

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gala_apples June 2 2010, 23:38:55 UTC
thanks, i'm glad you liked it. it sort of pushes my belivablity bounderies, i'm not sure tony would ever get married. which is why sid23 is so negative, because i honestly can't see tony&marriage ever going well.

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tamzinrose June 2 2010, 09:40:27 UTC
The first bit is slightly not English though. We don't have quarters or slim jims or jube jubes [as far as I'm aware. I don't even know what those are].

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tamzinrose June 2 2010, 09:40:41 UTC
But other that that I liked it

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gala_apples June 2 2010, 23:42:38 UTC
okay, i'll change it. my other English fandom is Harry Potter, so i'm not used to talking about candy and money. so a) what coin would be put in a candy machine, and b) what two candies might they have in said machine?

btw, these are jube jubes: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jujube_%28confectionery%29 i meant the canadian ones, we have these in my friend's resturant, they're great.

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