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shan_3414 in skinsbang_vent

saturday snippets: drama edition

Jun 11, 2011 17:09

The theme this week is DRAMA! Show us what you got!

*mod post, !snippet saturday

Comments 12

tromana June 12 2011, 05:54:25 UTC

Not the first scene that popped into my head, but that one revealed way too much the plot. Anyway ( ... )

miss_peg June 12 2011, 11:30:58 UTC

I like knowing more about this story because I can picture this in its rightful place along the timeline. I think it's a great piece though, a good one to chose, standalone. You know I love your writing more and more, I always have and you write Alo and Rich so well.

tromana June 15 2011, 04:14:56 UTC

Thank you. *hugs* Just hope I can get into writing it again now. :-)

shan_3414 June 13 2011, 01:09:53 UTC

I'm so excited for this! It's so ~intriguing and there's a serious dearth of good, lengthy gen 3 fic. You've got Rich & Alo down perfectly!

Thread 7

miss_peg June 12 2011, 11:27:35 UTC

Short, (not so) sweet and full of swearing...just to warn you. Would have given you more, but it's a significant part of the plot so more would spoil too much.

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‘You fucking cunt,’ he screamed, darting across the room and pinning him by the scruff of his neck against the back wall.

‘Was ‘oping I’d never see you again,’ Sam snarled, wrapping his fingers around Cook’s hand as he pressed it harder against his throat. He could smell blood on his hands, a faint reminder of his past crimes. He wasn’t afraid to kill someone, not anymore.

‘Don’t you fucking talk, understand me? Don’t you fucking say a fucking thing unless I ask you to.’

‘But,’ Cook just pushed his hand tighter around Sam’s neck and watched the blood catch in his face, turning it a deep shade of crimson. It wouldn’t take long to kill him, to murder him in cold blood. He couldn’t do it though, that wasn’t why he was there. He had a purpose and he wasn’t going to waste his time by killing the only person who could help.

shan_3414 June 13 2011, 01:11:07 UTC

Man, perfect Cook is perfect. This looks completely excellent!

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shan_3414 June 13 2011, 05:15:37 UTC

This looks absolutely ace, babe. Can't wait.

observer1304 June 13 2011, 21:30:23 UTC

This sounds completely amazing. I love the way, how even in this short piece, you really make Katie's character come to life.

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shan_3414 June 13 2011, 05:32:54 UTC

Lord, this so perfectly encompasses everything I love about Katie & Emily's relationship. Golden.

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shan_3414 June 14 2011, 21:56:00 UTC

Oh, man, really looking forward to seeing where all this goes. <3