Fic: Today There is Triumph (Companion piece to Tomorrow There Is Truth) Jack/Sam FRM/R

[velvetwhip]

This is a present for the astonishing and splendid m_ravensblood. As some of you know, I write most of my fic in the BTVS fandom, where I have become known for writing companion pieces which tell the same story from the perspectives of each party. I have decided to try my hand at that in this fandom for the first time. I hope m_ravensblood enjoys her second prezzie and that

Comments

[m_ravensblood]

It's an exquisitely crafted fic. I love the idea of Jack plotting even during a moment of pleasure and deciding Tom's parents must die to further consecrate their union :D

Thank you very very much for such a wonderful present!!!

[velvetwhip]

Actually, I meant for it to imply that they were going to kill Chloe along with them...perhaps I need to fine tune that bit...

Gabrielle

[m_ravensblood]

Oh I realized that Chloe was included, I just was saving commenting on that for your journal. The story is too good not to comment on it at each place :D

[velvetwhip]

Phew! I was worried that I hadn't dramatized things effectively.

You are so sweet!

Gabrielle

[roman_romantic]

Is wonderful concept to see both POVs in two fics. Much I like the way Jack intends Sam to kill Chloe. (such an irritating child!) Is much a lovely present for La Bella Principessa! Brava!

[velvetwhip]

Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed this piece. Killing Chloe seemed a fine idea to me.

Gabrielle