Comments | sketchofsoda: fiction: reaching my threshold 1/3

sketchofsoda

fiction: reaching my threshold 1/3

Sep 10, 2011 01:50

( reaching my threshold -staring at the truth 'til i'm blind- 1/3 ) NC-17, 9615 words.
eventual Arthur/Cobb/Eames, established Arthur/Eames, Arthur/Cobb, Cobb/Eames.
warnings: dub-con, breath play, elements of bdsm, bottom!cobb

Cobb starts to feel the emptiness of his missing partner as he lives his life with his children. Strange enough though, that' ( Read more... )

arthur/eames, arthur/cobb/eames, arthur/cobb, cobb/eames, fiction, holy shit

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forgerness September 10 2011, 01:21:23 UTC

Okay, I loved Arthur and Eames' seductive moves to Cobb so much, omg. Cobb, seriously, do not reject their advances.

I love your Cobb so much, I always have. I just... he is awesome. I approve with all of my heart. And this part:

"“Looks good,” comments Eames as Cobb races to swallow, fingers coming up to wipe his mouth clean but Eames catches his hand, pressing it to the table. Cobb narrows his eyes at Eames, confused, and stays that way when Eames catches Cobb's jaw in between his index finger and thumb, tilting his head so he can lick at his lips. He kisses Cobb after, slipping his tongue right in, tasting like the coffee of his tiramisu."

Basically I CANNOT wait for the next parts. ♥

sketchofsoda September 11 2011, 11:00:18 UTC

It'll take a bit, but Cobb will come around eventually. I mean, c'mon, who would reject both Arthur and Eames at the same time?

Thank you. Cobb's my favourite character and I try to do him some justice.

Haha. There was meant to be 2000 more word to this post, but LJ was all like NO, THIS IS AS FAR AS YOU GET MY FRIEND and I had to end it here. The next part will be up soon, don't you fret. C:

ofvanity September 11 2011, 21:09:42 UTC

This is fucking AWESOME. Seriously though, I love your work here and how you've built Cobb's hesitation and automatic self-preserving defense. I love how Arthur and Eames have always had this peripheral presence and how their courting is unconventional to say the least but terribly disarming. I love how when Arthur presses his thumb at Cobb's throat, Cobb is defenseless, because he wants it. I especially love that there is no qualm about domesticity, no commitment problems, nothing left unsaid.

I can't wait to see where you take this and these characters.

sketchofsoda September 12 2011, 12:34:38 UTC

I put a lot of work into this particular story and I'm glad you're enjoying the ride so far. Thank you for giving this a chance. ♥

I really don't how to respond to such a great comment, though I guess the best way would be updating- one will be on it's way shortly!