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skelly_lector

Standoffish (1/2)

Mar 22, 2009 15:02

Title: Standoffish
Rating: PG-13
Author: Yours truly, skelly_lector
Pairing: Pete/Patrick and a bit of suggested Ryan/Brendon
Warning: Large amounts of language, alcohol, and snogging. Tell me if I got the rating wrong.
Summary: Pete's always been perfectly fine with kissing guys to get girls, but something about that short, pudgy geek by the bar is making him ( Read more... )

fall out boy, slash, william beckett, patrick stump, peterick, ryan ross, pete wentz, brendon urie

Comments 12

comotosejournal March 23 2009, 01:30:17 UTC

ah!! this is fantastic! where's part 2??

skelly_lector March 23 2009, 01:32:00 UTC

Not up yet, but I'll be posting soon, promise. :)

dazi_li March 23 2009, 02:13:46 UTC

ICU, dA's Fitzgerald of Peterick, ICU. ;)

skelly_lector March 23 2009, 19:52:43 UTC

ICU2, dA's Hemingway of Peterick. Though, really, I think it should be the other way around, seeing as Fitzgerald was the more experienced, talented writer that Hemingway looked up to. ;)

dazi_li March 23 2009, 23:34:49 UTC

Well shucks, you flatter me. ;)

huthuthike March 23 2009, 08:11:26 UTC

I loved this! :) Was the last line intended to be a lyric from 7 Minutes in Heaven? 8D

skelly_lector March 23 2009, 19:50:45 UTC

Whoa...it wasn't, but it kind of is, isn't it? Weird.
Glad you liked, anyway. ^^

deep_lost March 23 2009, 14:30:33 UTC

We want more! =p

skelly_lector March 23 2009, 19:51:30 UTC

Haha, that's awesome. I'll post the second part soonish. ^^

poetic_pumpkin March 23 2009, 22:23:13 UTC

i feel like summarizing my experience with reading this fic with an emoticon. since however emoticons are not available to me, as far as i can see, i shall simply make a keyboarded interpretation.

:D <-- me

i simply love this. i love the hyena pack like aspect: predatory. dare i say yum? very awesome.

Gabe’s in the center, as usual, leaning back and crossing his long legs in their atrocious black and white checked skinny jeans i know where i have seen those! love that they got a mention.

i loved how you wrote pete. he's kinda the anti!pete in respect to other fics i've encountered. i like it. he's not so sure. the swagger but not the soul. and the kiss with patrick. whoa! from the second patrick turned those eyes on wentzable to the very last line (and how i love that line), yeah, that killed me.

love the way you write. love the way you have rocked my heretofore crappy afternoon. thank you for this.

update as soon as your heart desires. which i really hope is soon. :D <-- look! another one!

skelly_lector March 24 2009, 00:32:59 UTC

Oh my god! The smiley faces; they're everywhere!

Fortunately, your comment basically made my face into the human equivalent of that little emoticon. I love how you really pick up on stuff and tell me what you enjoyed. Funnily enough, the stuff you liked is what I'm proud of.

Thank you very much for brightening *my* rather crappy afternoon. :D

poetic_pumpkin March 24 2009, 01:10:17 UTC

it's the attack of the smileys. what can i say? :D

ack! that one was totally unplanned. he just popped out.

thank you. i don't like leaving little reviews. scratch that. i don't think i can leave a little review. i am extraordinarily wordy and i have tried to calm the out-spewing of copious rambles, but they cannot be stopped. devilish fiends.

... i also have a tendency to think too much about this thing or that, hence the "picking up on stuff". it doesn't always work, but mostly. he he. so go me... us. yeah, definitely us.

sorry your afternoon was crappy. crappy afternoons are monkey poo. glad i could help... after you helped. again: score for us!

ps- be proud of it all. for it is greatness. :D <-- another one, for the road.