Brilliant, I simply adored this chapter. I've been waiting a while for this and it was well worth it, I was thoroughly intrigued. I shall eagerly anticipate the next part. -CynicalBriton (I should be logged in but have forgotten my password.)
Take as long as you need, I can wait. Maybe I'll actually get some writing done while I'm waiting but even when I'm doing that your story sneaks into my mind and I try not to write parts of your plot into mine, it's infectious! (I remembered my password which I used as an excuse to comment again.)
Yay! This update just made my day! I love the interesting turn this story is taking and "Ew" coming from Bella Goth made me laugh. Awesome work as always, can't wait for the next chapter :D
An amazing chapter, as always! You're story is terribly interesting and I love all the connections among the characters... You are giving so much depth to the pre-made hoods.
Oh, I'm so happy that I checked this page today - great update! Can't say I'm surprised with how Bella's reacting, though. She seems like such a prude. XD Oh gods, New Mrs. Crumplebottom in the making =P
Bella has her own ideas about things and has trouble seeing them from another perspective. She's also more influenced by her father's beliefs than she'd care to admit.
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I love the interesting turn this story is taking and "Ew" coming from Bella Goth made me laugh.
Awesome work as always, can't wait for the next chapter :D
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