[Multipart] In Denial - Inui/Kaidoh

Jun 21, 2008 00:13

Disclaimer: I do not own Prince of Tennis.

Title: In Denial [Part One]
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Pairing: Inui/Kaidoh
Author: Mana Dairoku/
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Kyaaaa!!!! hakkai_sensei June 27 2008, 10:43:54 UTC
*alternately flails and dies*

Very interesting start. Moar, moar! I love this pairing, I do.

Saankyuu for sharing!

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Re: Kyaaaa!!!! sixthwinemaiden June 27 2008, 14:24:25 UTC
*SQUIGGLES BY~~ YAAAY!*

Thank you, sensei! ♥ OMG I'VE BEEN APPROVED BY KAIDOH! *DIES WITH YOU* XDDD;; I'm glad to know more Inu/Kai fangirls! MORE LOVE FOR INUI AND KAIDOH! ^___^ *sparkles at your direction*

And thank yooouuu once again for reading! :D

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dhorz July 11 2008, 09:58:21 UTC
(I'm reading fics one at a time, so forgive me if I haven't even begun the 2nd part, Mana-chan...)

First of all, the descriptions were lovely. I like the first paragraph, the leaves and all, and I just LOOOVE the observations that Inui makes.

Inui! *cries* What's wrong? Does he have an anxiety disorder or something?
Kaidoh should take good care of his senpai. *grin*
And it's so Kaidoh not to say "I love you", instead saying "Same here". I find it cute. *melt*

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disutansu October 5 2008, 06:43:52 UTC
Yes, super late on this, but I'm glad to see the third part up, so I'll read through this fic without stopping. After last night, this is just what I need. ^_^

It really feels like autumn right now where I am, and my backyard has dried leaves that have fallen already. Not as much as I had back in my hometown, but I suppose, it was fun stepping on the leaves and crushing them. With this fic, I think I'd like to be more conscious of them.

I am worried that something is seriously wrong with Inui... and after that very wonderful coming together in his room, I hope not. ;-;

Inui’s fingers trailed across the younger boy’s cheek and, as Kaidoh enfolded his arms around him, Inui pressed his lips on Kaidoh’s-softly and unhesitantly.

This does something to me. Sort of makes me *sigh~* and believe in love and... such. ^_^

Thank you ne, Mana.

*goes off to read the second part*

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sixthwinemaiden October 17 2008, 11:02:31 UTC
*LOVES ON HELEN-CHAN*

I don't know what to say~ (;~;) Though I also have my bad for leaving the third part hanging for quite some time. DD: But I'm happy to know that you're liking the progress so far. :DD

Gwuuh, and that line... is like the only love line that I got right, I think. XDD I've always thought of Inui's movements as somewhat smooth and precise because he's a data person after all, and whenever I imagine him approaching Kaidoh... *just flails because she can't explain it XD*

Inui~~ ♥

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disutansu October 26 2008, 05:11:51 UTC
It's one of the dangers of writing long fics. You'll never know if you can finish it in a timely manner... which is perhaps why I have so many unfinished ones sitting in my computer, waiting patiently for my inspiration to return.

*FLAILS TOO BECAUSE GAH* Right now I'm in such a... romantic mood. *will blame it on two certain someones though they won't know it's their fault* I want to read romantic, sappy, makes-me-melt stories... *goes to do so*

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sixthwinemaiden November 3 2008, 12:26:02 UTC
That looks like a wise move. Perhaps I shouldn't post anything at all if I haven't finished all parts of a multichapter. ^___^

InuKai will always make me want to believe in love~ ♥ Enjoy the sappy'ness, Helen-chan!

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