Comments | sistine_may: GLEE FIC: Identity (8/8)

sistine_may

GLEE FIC: Identity (8/8)

Mar 31, 2012 13:07

Thank you to all the people who have read this, and especially those who have given feedback, especially whosgotyou and many_a_dream here and sweetconformity on the glee_kink_meme, whose prompt it was. It has been a challenge writing this to a deadline, especially since this turned out about 20,000 words longer than I had planned. I hope you have all enjoyed it, even if you haven't left feedback ( Read more... )

kurt/blaine, glee, au, au_bingo, identity, fic

Comments 11

marieglee3 March 31 2012, 06:17:16 UTC

That was a very pretty story. Thank-you!

sistine_may April 1 2012, 09:57:44 UTC

Thank you :) It's fun seeing if I can write to other people's ideas!!

whosgotyou March 31 2012, 06:39:09 UTC

I happy to see that everything went well with the delivery. I was a little worried since you had mentioned before that his hips where not spreading. I also want to praise you for mentioning the baby needing cows milk. In other stories I've read people tend to forget Kurt doesn't have a way to feed the baby. If you don't mind me asking, how many children do they wind-up have in total?

sistine_may April 1 2012, 10:00:17 UTC

Thank you so much for your feedback - your support on every part has been most encouraging :)

The bit about the milk came about because I get a little frustrated when mpreg fics don't deal with that side of things (which, admittedly, I have done before).

As for how many children... I don't know. At the moment, that's up the reader but at some stage, I may do a little follow-up fic set twenty years in the future or something and say how many they have. Feel free to imagine though until I do!!

windrider1967 March 31 2012, 15:50:26 UTC

I have been waiting until the end of this to comment ... I am blown away by the depth of thought this has shown. You have tackled so many issues in this short fic and done it all so beautifully. The historical aspects were well done and the social implications handled with grace and tact. I appreciate you sharing it with me.

Can I say that when it started I was getting traces of M night Shamalain's "the village" and damned if you didn't put him to shame

sistine_may April 1 2012, 10:09:00 UTC

Wow, thank you! I was worried that I wasn't getting enough depth in there because I was writing to a deadline and I often felt quite rushed (but the deadline was my fault, so...). I didn't intend to tackle all those issues but somehow they worked their way in there. I love this period of time at the moment (watching 'Lark Rise to Candleford' currently) so my fic was influenced by that and the knowledge of the societal pressures of the day ( ... )

windrider1967 April 1 2012, 12:31:59 UTC

I was actually disappointed in the Village when I saw it. I think it was the fact of the village being set as a social experiment thing that got me to the comparison in all honesty.

What you were trying to get across was definatly there and I loved it. Thanks again for sharing. Now someone force ME to get back on my WIP cause mu bunnies are rebelling

sistine_may April 3 2012, 10:37:14 UTC

Oh, okay, a social experiment - I see the connection now :) Yes, rereading it, it does kind of come across like that, as if someone had set the village apart and sat back to watch them evolve (or devolve).

Get back to that WIP you're writing!!!!!!! (that forceful enough?)

kristinaa1 April 3 2012, 01:35:08 UTC

Just finished reading, I really enjoyed this story, thank u

sistine_may April 3 2012, 10:35:27 UTC

Thank you so much :) I'm pleased you enjoyed it!

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sistine_may May 24 2012, 10:54:23 UTC

You cried? Wow :) I'm thrilled that it provoked that kind of response. I must to admit to lots of emotion when I was writing this chapter because I was so happy they were getting a happy ending (sometimes I think I get waaaay too emotionally involved with fanfic, even when I'm writing it!).

Thank you so much for your comments!!