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Possibilities Pt 2 (fic)

Sep 22, 2009 11:23

Title: Possibilities Pt 2 (was "Pairings Paragraphs")
Rating: PG
Continuities: Animated, G1
Contains: Gen, gen, and a little more gen.
Notes: These are four short paragraphs about characters from a list of pairings/friendships/relationships of other sorts that I'd been wanting to write. The goal was to convey some important part of the relationship in ( Read more... )

character: seekers, character: protectobots, character: sentinel, continuity: tfa, character: grapple and hoist, character: starscream clones, fandom: transformers, character: ratchet, continuity: g1, character: cityformers and gestalts, minibots, character: jazz, type: fic, series: possibilities, character: blurr

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sister_dear September 23 2009, 18:11:32 UTC

Thanks for reading them, even if you're not familiar with those characters. That's a compliment in and of itself. :)

That's how I see it. He had to be doing something right, and he was apparently competent enough to hold off those spiders long enough for Elita and Optimus to escape.

Yeah, I see what you mean. I wanted it to be a little bit of a run-on because they're all panicking, but I can see how the sentence gets a little unwieldy. Thanks very much for the con-crit!

mmouse15 September 23 2009, 03:54:56 UTC

No, you didn't! That first one is perfect! The times I've listened to my mom bitch about her patients sounds exactly like that!

Gears and Huffer made me laugh out loud! I mean, really, what better revenge than to out-talk someone who likes to chatter? Great job with that one.

*pokes* There's more story to the Jazz/Sentinel one, I'm pretty sure.

Poor Blurr! Wow, does that ever fit beautifully with the show. Nice job of filling those scenes in a bit. It was necessary, and I'm glad you did it.

Once again, a very nice set, Sister!

sister_dear September 23 2009, 18:05:44 UTC

Lol, those two would so have regular meet-ups to let off a little steam.

I'm glad you enjoyed Gears and Huffer! :D

Sentinel and Jazz have this great big complicated relationship in my head, lol. It basically boils down to them having a degree of mutual respect but also there being a lot of tension between them because they have such different personalities and ways of going about things.

The Blurr and Starscream clones one is something I've been trying to write for ages but always seemed to get stuck on halfway through. These short little things are great for finally getting something 'finished' down.

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