Commentary Meme: For My Children

[sister_dear]

Still pecking away at the rest of these. mmouse15 asked for For My Children. My comments in bold.

Comments

[mmouse15]

Fascinating! Thank you for doing the commentary. I hope you'll do more between these two, because I really like how they interact here. It fits in well with how I think about them, too. They're not comfortable with each other, yet, but they are trying. I love how you write them.

[sister_dear]

I'd love to do more with them; we'll have to see if they let me, lol.

Yes, exactly. That kind of interaction just makes sense to me for them.

[tainry]

Oh fun! I love these commentaries, and this is a nice story, does what you wanted it to. They're not going to be bosom buddies right off, and I don't see Hide as exactly a Chatty Kathy either. XD

Also, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! :DDD
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[sister_dear]

They've been an interesting exercise; once you start writing, you start remember more and more things to write. Yes, I count this story as a definite success.

<3 Thank you!