Comments | sister_coyote: Fic: Under Her Boughs (Fran, Mjrn, Jote; PG)

sister_coyote

Fic: Under Her Boughs (Fran, Mjrn, Jote; PG)

May 30, 2007 17:57

Under Her Boughs
Farewell to the Wood.
FFXII, Fran, Mjrn, Jote. 1400 words.
Worksafe. Spoilers through Eryut Village.

( When Fran left, she did so quietly, and in the night, that no one would watch her go. )

character: mjrn, length: fic, character: fran, genre: backstory, rating: worksafe, genre: gen, [fic], fandom: final fantasy xii, character: jote

Comments 8

crysiana May 31 2007, 01:18:10 UTC

That's beautiful. ♥

mithrigil May 31 2007, 01:44:40 UTC

Oh, the somberness, the threads, and her voice. I love how she speaks at the end of desiring to hear it, when it's been taunting the reader throughout. Exquisite!

lassarina May 31 2007, 02:06:21 UTC

Oof. Ow. This is beautiful, and I love the way you interwove the scenes here. So lovely. ♥

laylah May 31 2007, 03:25:29 UTC

nngh. ow. oh.

But in the center of the spinning dance, palm to palm with her sisters, she looked around and saw suddenly that there was no way free of the circle;

...and that's my heart seizing up right there.

You did lovely things with this. ♥

regicidaldwarf May 31 2007, 04:59:31 UTC

"I must hear my own voice," she said, and that stopped Mjrn

And that stopped me too, in that way where I was just going "Oh". Gorgeous.