I...generally don't read Vincent. But I thought I'd give this a try anyway, because it was you. And it was well worth it. Reeve's POV is a delightful place to be. ^^
Vincent was spare and awkward with words -- unless he was being morose, and really, spare and awkward was better than morose
♥ Fabulous quiet sense of humor, there, the sort I imagine you'd need to be able to tease something *besides* moroseness (word?) out of Vincent.
Thank you! I'm quite flattered you gave it a read despite that, and glad it didn't disappoint. :D
I have such a devil of a time with Vincent, because I have a hard time writing angst. Even minimalist Vincent triggers an 'oh lord, I'm laying it on too thick, back off!' instinctive response.
Reeve is pure joy, because I can't imagine you could play Cait Sith for an extended period of time without having one hell of a sense of humor.
I'm actually in a part of the country where we get no snow, and 'lows' are in the 50F/10C range -- this is partly me being wistfully reminiscent of curling up in front of a fire with snow falling outside.
*snuggles* they're so cute! It's good to see them... I don't know, content? You'd think that waff would be sort of ooc by definition for vince, but this was really well done, and very believable, and <3.
Thank you! Yeah, I love to see Vincent happy (well, and Reeve too, but it's a lot easier to make Reeve happy ;) ). Even if it's a very quiet sort of happy.
I love the... the establishedness of the dialogue, with Vincent's comment that he burns and the joke about killing things and also, also, I can totally imagine Reeve fumbling determinedly with an ornamental button and Vincent just smirking and letting him. Oh Vincent. Your sense of humor. And also the touch-and-go with Vincent's biological issues and his more bestial side and Reeve not being really bothered about being bitten during sex and uhjdlougjdl.
And the sex is HOT. And this may seem weird, but thank you for not writing buttsex. It's hot, yes, but it's also the first thing a lot of yaoi sex writers fall back on (and yes, I'm guilty of this too) and you're over here writing mutual masturbation which is hotter and more interesting than actually quite a lot of penetration fics. So, kudos. :D
I love Vincent's sense of humor -- I wouldn't like him nearly so much if he was just dooooooooom all the time. ;) Writing an established relationship was different but a lot of fun. (And yes. Oh, yes. I could just hear the conversation: Reeve: *much struggling* Vincent: *amused look* Reeve: ...okay, how the hell does this come loose? Vincent: It doesn't. Reeve: ... Reeve: You could have told me that five minutes ago. Vincent: I certainly could have. *smirk*)
XD Not weird at all. I actually love sex-writing that doesn't go straight for the penetration -- it's very hot, but focusing just on it misses a lot of other interesting (and omg hot) options. (I'm also a big proponent of more oral sex in hetsmut, so.... ;) ) I'm glad this one worked for you.
Come over to the dark side. We have... um... angsty doomcookies and absurd little robot cats...?
Quiet fluff, that's a good way to describe it. I can definitely see this type of happiness on Vincent, just sort of a gentle glow of it, kinda reminds me of a cat curled up somewhere warm to bask.
And while I'm thinking of it, I'll second voodoobob's props for writing hot sex without anal. Probably better for a pairing of fandom's perma-ukes (even though Vincent shows none of that here, my, no).
Thank you! Yeah, this is the way I can see Vincent happy -- sort of content. Laying his burdens down.
Hee hee. Yeah, the two of them rarely get the chance to top in fandom, do they? (My interpretation of Vincent doesn't rule out him taking the lead sexually in a situation where he feels comfortable -- but that's actually also true of my interpretation of Reeve, since I tend not to use fixed seme/uke roles.)
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Vincent was spare and awkward with words -- unless he was being morose, and really, spare and awkward was better than morose
♥ Fabulous quiet sense of humor, there, the sort I imagine you'd need to be able to tease something *besides* moroseness (word?) out of Vincent.
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I have such a devil of a time with Vincent, because I have a hard time writing angst. Even minimalist Vincent triggers an 'oh lord, I'm laying it on too thick, back off!' instinctive response.
Reeve is pure joy, because I can't imagine you could play Cait Sith for an extended period of time without having one hell of a sense of humor.
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And yes. Vincent is such eye candy. XD
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I love the... the establishedness of the dialogue, with Vincent's comment that he burns and the joke about killing things and also, also, I can totally imagine Reeve fumbling determinedly with an ornamental button and Vincent just smirking and letting him. Oh Vincent. Your sense of humor. And also the touch-and-go with Vincent's biological issues and his more bestial side and Reeve not being really bothered about being bitten during sex and uhjdlougjdl.
And the sex is HOT. And this may seem weird, but thank you for not writing buttsex. It's hot, yes, but it's also the first thing a lot of yaoi sex writers fall back on (and yes, I'm guilty of this too) and you're over here writing mutual masturbation which is hotter and more interesting than actually quite a lot of penetration fics. So, kudos. :D
You're converting me to Vincent/Reeve. stop it.
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I love Vincent's sense of humor -- I wouldn't like him nearly so much if he was just dooooooooom all the time. ;) Writing an established relationship was different but a lot of fun. (And yes. Oh, yes. I could just hear the conversation: Reeve: *much struggling* Vincent: *amused look* Reeve: ...okay, how the hell does this come loose? Vincent: It doesn't. Reeve: ... Reeve: You could have told me that five minutes ago. Vincent: I certainly could have. *smirk*)
XD Not weird at all. I actually love sex-writing that doesn't go straight for the penetration -- it's very hot, but focusing just on it misses a lot of other interesting (and omg hot) options. (I'm also a big proponent of more oral sex in hetsmut, so.... ;) ) I'm glad this one worked for you.
Come over to the dark side. We have... um... angsty doomcookies and absurd little robot cats...?
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C'mon, convert! We have cookies!
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And while I'm thinking of it, I'll second voodoobob's props for writing hot sex without anal. Probably better for a pairing of fandom's perma-ukes (even though Vincent shows none of that here, my, no).
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Hee hee. Yeah, the two of them rarely get the chance to top in fandom, do they? (My interpretation of Vincent doesn't rule out him taking the lead sexually in a situation where he feels comfortable -- but that's actually also true of my interpretation of Reeve, since I tend not to use fixed seme/uke roles.)
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