Fic: Breath's Dance (Fang/Vanille, FF13, not worksafe)

May 17, 2010 00:00

Breath's Dance
And yes, Fang remembered; now she remembered. It wasn't an anniversary she kept particularly in mind (that she saved for the first time Vanille had told her she loved her; the first time they'd had sex), but two years ago this day Vanille had first turned around with a determined look in her eyes and pulled Fang into a kiss that was ( Read more... )

character: oerba dia vanille, length: fic, pairing: fang/vanille, [fic], genre: pwp, genre: f/f, rating: not worksafe, character: oerba yun fang, fandom: final fantasy 13

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maladaptive May 17 2010, 12:31:51 UTC
There's a FF13 kinkmeme!?

And this was fabulous; Vanille's voice especially comes through really strong. funny, in-game she irritates the hell outta me, but here she's positively charming. I loved the little reprimands not to touch.

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spellcoats May 17 2010, 19:22:03 UTC
There is, but sadly it's almost dead.

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sister_coyote May 17 2010, 23:27:01 UTC
Yup! It's at ffxiii_kink, although as spellcoat notes it's pretty well winding down.

And thank you! I have a soft spot for Vanille.

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jyuufish May 17 2010, 13:02:38 UTC
That was absolutely wonderful. You know I love this comm but there's too much Fang/Lightening/Vanille and not enough Fang/Vanille so you've made me so very happy ♥ Incredibly hot!

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sister_coyote May 17 2010, 23:27:15 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed. :)

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spellcoats May 17 2010, 19:21:21 UTC
Oh, I remember reading this. One of the few actually good fills on the meme.

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sister_coyote May 17 2010, 23:27:37 UTC
Thank you!

Love your username, by the way. :)

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spellcoats May 17 2010, 23:39:13 UTC
A Dalemark fan?!

(I hope you appreciate how hard it was to type that without capslock.)

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sister_coyote May 17 2010, 23:45:38 UTC
Yes indeed! A DWJ fan in general, but I am particularly fond of the Dalemark books.

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shewhoflies May 18 2010, 20:57:56 UTC
Hi! I'm not going to read this yet, but just wanted to say that I'm glad you're back!

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sister_coyote May 19 2010, 05:29:04 UTC
Hallo! I'm glad I'm back too. :)

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o_mayari May 20 2010, 17:24:44 UTC
This is really fabulous. The writing is gorgeous, everything from Vanille's inner music to Fang's wonderful, slightly overwhelmed POV. I really enjoyed it. I'm only about 75% sold on Fang/Vanille as a couple from what we saw in-game, but this really sells me on their relationship. Great job!

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sister_coyote May 25 2010, 05:43:44 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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