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xenophyle July 20 2009, 22:49:06 UTC
Fan-tastic characterization. The description made me feel like I was there. And how you described the kissing should be taught to all erotica writers. I'm taking notes.

Awesome.

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sister_coyote July 20 2009, 23:27:28 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

I think a kiss can be just as erotic as full-on smut (as much as I like writing full-on smut!).

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Kiss as erotic as full-on smut charisstoma July 21 2009, 04:30:53 UTC
You made that point very well indeed with a fillip of humor at the end.

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kiwilite July 23 2009, 00:45:31 UTC
I am in 110% agreement that a kiss can be just as erotic as full smut!

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wind_storms July 20 2009, 23:01:47 UTC
sister_coyote July 20 2009, 23:27:46 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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sister_coyote July 20 2009, 23:28:10 UTC
:D :D Thank you!

...and yes, those are both me! Nicely done.

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leaf_zelindor July 20 2009, 23:56:41 UTC
LOL oh Ed....Very nice. ^^
~Leaf~

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sister_coyote July 22 2009, 05:25:13 UTC
Thank you. :)

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naive_wanderer July 21 2009, 06:53:17 UTC
Ahhh, this was my prompt! :) You filled it beautifully; I love this SO MUCH.

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sister_coyote July 22 2009, 05:25:35 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. It was really delightful to write.

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