Fic: We'll Watch Sunsets (Havoc, Havoc/Sciezka, ensemble; worksafe, manga spoilers)

[sister_coyote]

First Sweet Charity fic is done! (And the other one is currently off to beta, hurrah.) This is for havocmangawip, who very generously bid for me and provided the prompts that resulted in this story, and then gave me permission to share it with the wider world. Thank you so much. ^___^

We'll Watch SunsetsThere's nowhere to go but forward, and up: toward

Comments

[_secretpassion_]

That was so cute!

I almost didn't read because of the spoiler manga chapters. (I read the English version that's published by Viz not the scanlations) If you're talking about Mustang's group being split up, that's revealed in chapter 52. I just checked. But if you're talking about something else then yeah.

[sister_coyote]

Thank you!

Is it 52? The 'last' manga-spoiler thing that happens in this story (which is pretty minor, but I like being safe) is Breda giving Havoc the barbells, at least to the best of my knowledge, so if that's earlier, I'd probably ought to be less overcautious on the spoiler warning. ^^;;

[sister_coyote]

Thank you! I'm glad I got them across well. ♥

And yup. I went through a manga-reading spree a couple of months back. I haven't read all the more recent scanlations on onemanga, but I'm pretty caught up. (Still a little bit twitchy about writing mangaverse, since there's a lot more canon to work with and I'm always afraid of goofing, it, but I'm getting better!)

[karanguni]

EEEEEEEEEEE-

I stopped reading FMA a long time ago, but I recently rewatched some of the anime -- my overflowing love for the colonel and his men just got tipped over the scales again. ♥ I don't know much of what happened in the manga anymore, but the camaraderie between all of the very distinct characters in Roy's team is sort of an eternal constant - and you've done them all so, so much justice in this.

Breda! Breda is complete gold. Oh Breda. I just -- doughnut king! ♥ And Hawkeye and her understanding of Roy; Roy and his own expectations; Fuery not being allowed near the magazines; Falman being a total encyclopaedia about alphabeta-isation. And then Havoc himself, who does not get enough love in fandom but who shines here so absolutely through his usual WOMEN ♥ ♥ act.

Um. *adds to memories and glees*

[sister_coyote]

Thank you!

I totally fell in love with Roy's group, watching the anime, and that was probably the best part of writing this -- getting a shot at all of them and the way they work (and play) together. ♥ I'm really glad that came across well. And oh, I have such fondness for Havoc, with his rotten luck. ;)

I'm really glad you liked this!

[elegantpaws]

Marvelous! Bloody Marvelous!

[sister_coyote]

Thank you! :D

[leaf_zelindor]

aweeeeeeee This was adorable!!!!! -giggles-
~leaf~

[sister_coyote]

♥!

Thank you. :D