Familiar Equation (Al, Ed, Winry, Pinako; gen, worksafe)

[sister_coyote]

Written to the prompt: "Ed - "I don't feel enough for you to cry."" Sorry for the delay (I am slowly getting my groove back) -- and it's gen and somewhat angsty, although probably not angsty enough to fit the prompt, honestly. But. There you go!

Familiar EquationBrother hurt often, which made it all the worse when he got stoic and guilty about

Comments

[sister_coyote]

Thank you!

I have an enormous weakness to the fictional trope of siblings who will do pretty nearly anything for one another, and, well, yeah. And poor Al. Oh, Al.

[box_of_doom]

Awww.... I think you got Al's feelings on the situation down quite well. And it was beautifully written and... it was a great read. ^^

[sister_coyote]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

[maladaptive]

Awww. This reminds me of why I fell in love with FMA in the first place (yeah, it was totally all on Al). He's just such a fabulous character and you captured him so well. ♥

[sister_coyote]

Thank you. Oh, Al, I love him so. He's like a giant metal superego, with very nice manners. ♥

[dreamer1789]

Sweet. ^^ I agree with the others: you've captured the characters well.

[sister_coyote]

Thank you! :D

[syvia]

^^ Poor Al- he's so unsquishable. :D

I love a fic about family- they're adorable and dysfunctional and I feel so sorry for Al.

Thank you!

[sister_coyote]

Thank you!

The family dynamics in the series really kill me dead. And Al. Poor Al. ♥