Comments | sister_coyote: Fic: every tool is a weapon -- if you hold it right (Havoc/Hawkeye, Mustang, ensemble; not worksafe)

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Fic: every tool is a weapon -- if you hold it right (Havoc/Hawkeye, Mustang, ensemble; not worksafe)

Jan 31, 2008 18:40

every tool is a weapon -- if you hold it right
Riza Hawkeye was not a devious woman.
Fullmetal Alchemist anime-verse. Hawkeye/Havoc, Mustang, ensemble. 3400 words.
NC-17/MA/Not Worksafe for explicit sex. Mild spoilers.

( Life had been hard as hell in Ishbal, hard and painful both, Riza reflected as she opened the Walshorn report for the sixteenth time -- but it had been simple. )

pairing: jean havoc/riza hawkeye, ensemble: dogs of the military, character: roy mustang, character: riza hawkeye, [fic], fandom: fullmetal alchemist, rating: not worksafe, character: jean havoc, genre: m/f

Comments 18

lassarina February 1 2008, 03:39:47 UTC

The beginning of the last paragraph just made me giggle ♥

mmmmm, hot. I really need to take advantage of Cadence's Christmas gift and start watching this series!!

sister_coyote February 1 2008, 22:09:06 UTC

Thank you!

...and yes, totally! It's a great series, very plotty and character-intensive. In addition to the Mustang's office characters that I've written about, I love the brotherly interaction between the two main characters so much.

cal_reflector February 1 2008, 04:34:43 UTC

Splendid writing; a introspective character study of Hawkeye through intercourse. Also appreciate the patient writing and clinical detail which is absent from most stories of this genre. Hawkeye listing the reasons why she liked Havoc was adorable.

She had intimate -- ha -- knowledge that he no longer lacked for female company

This was probably my favorite line. Thanks for your hard work.

sister_coyote February 1 2008, 22:09:41 UTC

Thank you!

Hawkeye is so... organized. :D

havocmangawip February 1 2008, 07:27:59 UTC

The ensemble characterization was spot on... detailed and vivid.

I'm absolutely in love with how you portrayed Havoc and Hawkeye. That was hot.

Just perfect!

Great taste in music as well!

sister_coyote February 1 2008, 22:10:23 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm delighted the characterization worked for you.

(And I love Ani. "Not a Pretty Girl" is the other of her songs on my Hawkeye playlist....)

annepackrat February 1 2008, 18:06:34 UTC

You just know Havoc's gotta be great and giving in bed, once he gets over the initial "oh god, I have a girl" phase.

sister_coyote February 1 2008, 22:11:11 UTC

Hee! Yes, poor guy. ...Honestly, I think the 'oh god, I have a girl' would contribute to his being very attentive in bed -- once he's managed somehow to nab one, he's not going to want to screw up. ;)

cornerofmadness February 11 2008, 03:36:08 UTC

I loved the title. That's what drew me in. I enjoyed the story very much

sister_coyote February 25 2008, 04:38:23 UTC

Thank you!

The song title always seemed very Hawkeye, to me.