Fic: Winter Rain (Sora, Riku, Kairi; G)

[sister_coyote]

Fluuuuuuffff....... This spawned off the OT3 'fic I'm working on, but didn't quite fit there, so...

Title: Winter Rain
Words: ~500
Characters/Pairings: Sora, Riku, Kairi; pre-SoRiKai
Rating: G
Summary: A trip to their island; a winter rain.
Canon/Spoilers: Set post-KH2; minor spoilers for KH2.
Warnings: Fluff? WAFF? That's really it.

Comments

[voodoobob]

... eeeeeee.

As always, you paint a picture with your words. I can see the three of them caught out in the rain, and cuddling in the shack under the sailcloth. I love the metaphors you used for Riku's eyes and his smile, and I love the note about Sora watching the two of them - I got the feeling it was because he was wary of being separated from them again.

And the adorable, wonderful pre-OT3 fluuuuff. Aiiiee, so happylove. ♥ That's totally Riku, having to be half-coaxed, half-dragged into realizing that yes, he's more than welcome there. Oh, Riku.

[sister_coyote]

♥ :D Thank you. I'm really glad the imagery and atmosphere came through -- it was the image that made me write it, but slice-of-life things like this can be so tricky to work out properly.

Yes, that's exactly how I see it: Sora's wary of losing them again, having fought so hard to find them. Kairi's determined that nobody get left behind. And Riku's so unsure, and so determined to hide it for fear of making demands where he feels he has no right, but fortunately the other two are more than willing to grab him by his hands (metaphorical or literal) and just drag him into the circle of their affection.

These three keep getting their stuff written because I love them all so much. I am incapable of saying 'no.' Totally, utterly incapable.

Especially when all three of them gang up on me.

[voodoobob]

You did it very nicely. ♥

Hey, I was right! Awww. *pets Sora* And yes, oh, poor Riku with his insecurities. It is a good thing he has two friends who love him so much and aren't shy about showing it.

Heheh. I know how you feel. The Trio is an irresistible force.

[theladygoddess]

They're so pretty ♥

[sister_coyote]

:D

(Icon love, by the way. Tseng, Elena -- squee.)

[fyretoppaaa]

*squees* That's so incredibly adorable, and I'm all warm with OT3 luff, now. XD I think my favorite line was: That snapped the look out of his eyes. "Er?" because the thought of Riku saying that just makes me laugh. X3 Silly boi, yes, you're allowed to get right into the thick of it! *giggle*

(Kairi knew that she and Sora would have made enough room even if they'd had to all crawl in Riku's lap to do it. She suspected Riku wouldn't even have guessed that.) Mmm. ♥ I love your Kairi--slightly mischievous; and your Riku--slightly thick. Although, the 'all' tacked in there was a bit odd; it made me think of a swarm of chibi Kairis and Soras climbing all over Riku's lap, or perhaps a pile of SoraRoxasKairiNamine. XDDDDD

[sister_coyote]

Thank you! Yeah, poor Riku, he needs so much encouragement, and also possibly a whack to the head with a clue-by-four. Fortunately, Sora and Kairi are there to provide encouragement and clue-ing. ;)

[harukami]

Oh, man. This is -- this is totally OT3 JUST as I see them.

I.

Yes.

[WIBBLES WITH MAD GLEE]

[sister_coyote]

Thank you!

They're so cute together it could almost put one in a coma, but I love 'em anyway. ;)

(Sorry for the late reply -- didn't realize until now that the post had new comments.)

[monique_27]

*hehe* It's like a "Blanket Fit" where all the clothes stay on. *^.~*

Very cute and fabulously written, with the characterizations and relationship dynamics that make me spam your journal like it's my job. *;p* Well done!

Charmingly blunt Sora, mischievous demanding Kairi, and clueless-but-not Riku for the WIN! *^___^* Wonderful bit of pre-SoRiKai goodness!