Cutting Ties

[sisredlo]

Title: Cutting Ties
Author: sisredlo
Rating: PG-13 for language and mild violence
Spoilers: none
Disclaimers: FNL and its characters aren't mine...as much as I wish one or two of them would show up in my bedroom.

This is my first attempt at fic.  It'll end up being a 4 or 5 parter.  Please be gentle - and any tips would be much appreciated!
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Tim's

Comments

[treehero]

Really like the idea, and I think we all knew who the "man" is, so this is really interesting. The fact that someone else in Tim and Billy's life would have to deal with "him" is a good one. No tips right now. Stylistically it's clear when you're doing dialogue; it's clear when you're conveying a character's thoughts. And you're using paragraphs. Those are the basics! Just one question -- we don't know Maddie and Anne from the show, right? I was concerned for just a moment that I should know who these girls are, but no, right? If I'm wrong, fill me in. And keep writing!

[sisredlo]

Yep - I didn't really think this would work with Lyla or Tyra since they would probably recognize him. Thanks for the feedback...I'm hoping to post part 2 tonight!