Fic: ...And It Feels So Good (X-Factor v3) [2/2]

[sirocco_360]

Title: ...And It Feels So Good [2/2]
Author: Sirocco
Fandom: X-Force/X-Factor v.3
Pairing: Rictor/Shatterstar
Rating: NC-17 for profanity and sexual content
Warnings: AU, M/M slash

Edited to add: Changed one line of dialogue because I can't leave things alone.

Comments

[twbasketcase]

Ah! I loved it! So awesome! God, see stuff like THIS needs to be canon to make me sane again XD Peter David should learn a thing or two ;D

Also, I freaking loved this line:
"I presume you are speaking figuratively, because I have no way of knowing the state of your digestive --"

I don't know why, but I like split my sides laughing when I read that because I could totally see Star saying something like that.

Also, the sexy stuff was really well written. Excellent descriptions AND emotions. Very well done. Kudos to you! :D

PS - You should definitely write more RicStar again when you get the inspiration! I really enjoyed your take on them :)

[sirocco_360]

Thank you! I plan to take up permanent residence in the good ol' State of Denial and continue to believe certain things never happened. It's much more fun this way.

I don't know why, but I like split my sides laughing when I read that because I could totally see Star saying something like that.

Yeah, that line popped into my head and it had Shatterstar written all over it.

Also, the sexy stuff was really well written. Excellent descriptions AND emotions. Very well done. Kudos to you! :D

*MAN,* sex scenes are tough to write effectively! I'm really glad you thought it worked. I was worried about that.

And it's a good thing you liked it, because there's a sequel in the works. :)

Thanks again!

[twbasketcase]

A sequel?? Excellent! Do you mind if I friend/watch you so I can keep an eye out for it?

[sirocco_360]

I don't mind at all; in fact, I'm flattered. You may have a little while to wait, since this part has taken over my life for the past month or so and I have some things to catch up on. But this story isn't over yet. :)

[eliyes]

Woo! A wonderful second half! You've got a little formatting problem, though:

By the time 'Star had carefully touched his lips to the fresh abrasions on Ric's knees and was s‚Äël‚Äëo‚Äëw‚Äël‚Äëy inching up his inner thighs,

And also:

'Star did that gave Ric the last  jolt he needed

[sirocco_360]

Oops. Formatting fixed. Thank you.

Glad you liked it. :)

[russetm]

That was delicious.

[sirocco_360]

Thank you.

[tangeriner]

Oh, man, that was so good. So so good. The humour and dialogue was perfect, and Julio was perfect, and Shatty was perfect, and the entire story was perfect. Please write a million more. I love these guys so much. Thanks for writing this. ^^

[sirocco_360]

First, thank you for your comment. I'm very pleased you liked it. :)

Second, I've been a fan of these two for over ten years, but there was virtually no fanfic about them back then. The 'Brokeback Mutant' remark last year made me go searching again, and your Rictor/Shatterstar page kept me entertained for hours. I know it hasn't been updated in a while, but I'm glad it's still there.

Third, I've got a sequel/series planned. Be careful what you ask for. ;)

[naiveprophet]

This was great. ^^ Funny and hot and sweet.

I liked that you had Julio a little out-of-shape, because, well, yeah, he would be, and Shatterstar's examination and announcement of it was hilarious.

“We can’t wreck the bed this time.” <--lmao, too funny!

Shatterstar being turned on by the scars--totally great.

Just... yeah. All around goodness. ^^ Thank you for sharing it.

[sirocco_360]

Thank you. Now to get caught up on my life, then to get working on the next installment. :)