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Necessary by the Order CH 2

Mar 08, 2006 20:30

Title: Necessary by the Order
Chapter: 2
Author: serade_black
Pairing: Sirius/Hermione
Rating: PG-13 now....NC-17 later.
Summary: Marriage law for Sirius and Hermione!
Archived: for now at ff.net.....later, it'll be on the Restricted Section.org.
;)

Both Chapters 1 & 2 link:

Comments 3

sirena_lupin March 9 2006, 03:41:02 UTC

I *love* marriage law fics... but you've got a few plot holes going. I think it's a great start, to be sure, and I'm really glad there's one post-hbp so that Snape's blood is taken into account... however, I'd really like to see you address how Sirius is a.) not dead and b.) (being that he is an escaped convict) would be an acceptable match. Wouldn't the ministry just arrest him right after they got married? Also... Tonks is a half-blood. What will they do with her?

Please, please keep writing. Like I said... I love marriage law fics and I really like the idea to do one with Sirius. Fill in the holes and this could be absolutely superb.

serade_black March 9 2006, 03:43:54 UTC

Thank you for the notes! They are totally appreciated and I am so thankful it wasn't just a praise.

Will handle Sirius being not dead.
Will deal with Tonks! *thanks so much for the heads up*

serade_black March 9 2006, 17:40:09 UTC

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2707088/1/