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siri2000

The Excursion

Apr 16, 2011 17:58

Chapter 9/ 12

Language: English
Rating: R
Disclaimer: The Brokeback Mountain Characters belong to Annie Proulx
Summary: This is an au! au story and there are no warnings (No one dies)

Ennis accompanies his Professor on a journey to a faraway country. But when he returns, he is not the same …
Feedback: Yes please, it keeps my friends and me motivated!

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the excursion - english

Comments 28

7upraf April 16 2011, 17:19:38 UTC

Gosh, this story is GOOD!
There really is something sexy about it. I love it very much and I kinda realized that there isn't much chapter to go! YIKES! I'll be sad when it's over cause these characters are very fun to read.
Thank you for this chapter. I can't wait for the next one, but I sure don't want to see Alma. (DUH! Fiancée, my *ss.)

Hugs

Raph

siri2000 April 22 2011, 14:19:47 UTC

"I can't wait for the next one, but I sure don't want to see Alma. "
Ennis as well ;)
I'm glad that you like it! Thanks for commenting!
Hugs back, siri

l_rabbit April 16 2011, 18:30:31 UTC

A fun and intriguing story, told very well. I'm glad to see you continuing it. Thanks for writing!

Hugs,
Leslie

siri2000 April 22 2011, 14:21:30 UTC

Thanks for your words!
siri

Very engaging... grieving_pln April 16 2011, 19:02:02 UTC

This story is so engaging. I'm enjoying it very much and I can't believe there are only three chapters left.

I loved the canon nod when Ennis took the card, and I really enjoyed the way Jack said goodbye, not letting Ennis get away without a hug. Very nice. ;)

Really wonderful story. I'm looking forward to reading the rest. :)

Hugs,
A~

Re: Very engaging... siri2000 April 22 2011, 14:24:15 UTC

"not letting Ennis get away without a hug. Very nice." I'm glad that you liked that special part, it's one of my favorites. Thanks for reading and commenting!
Siri

ifyoucantfixit2 April 17 2011, 00:12:26 UTC

I love this story so much. I am sad that you are only going
on for a few more chapters.

siri2000 April 22 2011, 14:27:25 UTC

Thanks for your words!
"I am sad that you are only going on for a few more chapters." you could check my other stories *hint* ;)
Siri

ifyoucantfixit2 April 17 2011, 00:14:22 UTC

Oh by the way I forgot to say. The professor gets on my
nerves....sorry

siri2000 April 22 2011, 14:28:13 UTC

I can imagine that. Ennis too.