HMD: Constructive & Positive Feedback!

[thepull_mods]

How's My Driving: Con-crit & Po-crit!

This post is for providing Constructive AND Positive feedback for fellow players regarding how they play their characters in Siren's Pull.

Constructive criticism should be just that - please avoid bashing or being rude. If you have critique for a characterization, please support it as much as possible and

Comments

[thepull_mods]

Player Name: The Mods

Character Name: SIREN'S PORT
Character Journal: thepull_mods
Character Canon Source: By The Players, For The Players

Okay in all seriousness... If you have some feedback for the game in general, please leave it here. What needs clean up, what needs editing, what information needs updating or more to it. Are things not clear? Are they too cluttered? What kind of plots and story lines or news are desired. Too much of one thing not enough of another? Thoughts on recent application and reserves processing? Just general questions? Suggestions, thoughts, ideas, or anything you think might be useful to help keep the game running smoothly, please them here.

We're trying to give you the best we can but we can't do it with out you. This is a great time to drop us a line.

[mirroredmemory]

I think that the system you guys used for this app cycle is a real winner; I know I didn't app anybody new this round but from a spectator's perspective it looks like it's been a lot more relaxed for you guys processing it and seems a lot more civilised than the free for all that it was before with dozens of apps pouring in all at once.

[thepull_mods]

We're constantly in review of our app processing, and how to tweak and make things fairer and happier for everybody, so we're glad to hear and see that we're on the right track and improving from May & July's cycles!

[senri]

Maybe this is just me idk... but I would really like to see more focus on the Core plot and the "WHY?" of Siren's Port in game. Why characters have actually been brought here, what's the deal with the Core anyway, that kind of thing. We have a lot of fun kind of city-slice-of-life plots but I would really like to see more of the focus on the world plot that's driving the game, and more opportunities for characters to get involved with that.

That said, the game seems to be doing great! So good job, guys. ºwº

[littlest_lord]

Character Name: Ciel Phantomhive
Character Journal: littlest_lord
Character Canon Source: Kuroshitsuji

Character Name: Nana
Character Journal: subject_seven
Character Canon Source: Elfen Lied

Character Name:Beatrice
Character Journal: beatrolliche
Character Canon Source: Umineko no naku koro ni

Character Name: Haruhi Fujioka
Character Journal: modestmusume
Character Canon Source: Ouran High School Host Club

Character Name: Kyubey
Character Journal: inkyubeytor
Character Canon Source: Puella Magi Madoka Magica

Character Name: Syrena
Character Journal: seaphonic
Character Canon Source: Pirates of the Caribbean

I've...kind of been on hiatus a little this month because of school and other crisisy things so I'm sorry about that for being flaky here and there ;n; Please forgive me and I'll backtag everything ever!

[longaevus]

You're so lovely and fantastic OOC and your characters are lovely to read even for not knowing their canons! And Nana's just an utter cutiepie. <3

[littlest_lord]

I'm so late to reply to this but ;A; aahh thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoy them, even if you're not familiar with their canons! ;u; That means a lot to me, thank you!

[painhumbles]

You need to stop being so amazing. /awesome at crit

But seriously, you're a complete doll OOC-ly and your characters are always so much fun to play off of. AND I LOVE ALL OUR CR. ;_;

[he_is_wild]

Player Name: Psi Yamaneko
Character Name: The Joker
Character Journal: he_is_wild
Character Canon Source: DC Comics

Clownface has been trolling hard this last month so I know he's been...yeah. Loud. He won't always have this level of activity, so sorry if he's been TOO noisy. Other than that...IDK. I've been sort of unsure about X number of things lately so any feedback is welcome.

[painhumbles]

I've said it before and I'll say it again, you're the definitive Joker to me. I honestly get little OH GOD OH GOD freaked-out spazzfits whenever I get a Joker tag in my inbox, because I'm actually, well, legitimately scared by him. In a good way, which means you're doing something so right. You have his voice and mannerisms down so perfectly and I admit I'm slowly working up to being table to tag him as much as I want, because LOL SO INTIMIDATED.

[controllingluck]

Truthfully, I love his activity. I've said it before but you play the best Joker. My fav on the net. I think his trolling is beautiful and Psi, any time you come to the mods with a new game plot I am gleeful. You have such brilliant ideas and are easy going and a delight to work with. It's nice to see Joker being "loud" once in a while and seriously, I think this city deserves a top ten wanted list soon.... *eyes this. Hmm* --ah! but yes. Keep on being Classy and never worry about being Too loud. You are SO careful with how you play him that it never ever comes across as too much (at least to me).

[the_dead_pool2]

Chuckles there is in both parts funny at times and yet at the same time very disturbing, often in some sort of delicious cake... thats like poisoned or something.

[athermercy]

Player Name: Lorena

Character Name: Elaine Belloc
Character Journal: athermercy
Character Canon Source: Lucifer.

There's an anon HMD in her journal! :)

[painhumbles]

Elaine is so precious. I just want to squish her forever.

[athermercy]

DAWW

/HOLDS

We need more family moments now her uncle's gone.

[dancing_pierrot]

Player Name: Tash
Character Name: Franziska von Karma
Character Journal: dancing_pierrot
Character Canon Source: Ace Attorney

Character Name: Tyrell
Character Journal: tinderfoot
Character Canon Source: Golden Sun

[littlest_lord]

I LOVE ALL OF MY CR WITH YOU HNNG rubbing my face all over it. Ilu Tash. You're brilliant when you play Franziska and I love love love every tag I get from her. I love that you go along with my ridiculous ideas and I'm so looking forward to Franziska acting as Ciel's life coach LMAO.

As for Tyrell, he makes me laugh. I love his interaction with Syrena. Hiss. B(

KEEP BEING A BOSS ILU

[dancing_pierrot]

And as I mentioned in my reply to your HMD, please keep those ideas coming, no matter how ridiculous you may consider them to be! Coming up with those kinda things is one of my favourite parts about RPing, and yesss, I really just adore all of our CR.

I LOVE YOU TOO ♥

[thelittlestbub]

Okay, that one thread between Byakuya and von Karma was a fun thread to do. It let him be all JUSTICE and was actually a lot of fun for me to write. I think they should meet or something. IDEK. I JUST HAD FUN OKAY?