A Risk Worth Taking--Epilogue

[sirenprincess]

Title: A Risk Worth Taking-Epilogue
Author: SirenPrincess
Rating: Teen (about the same as the books)
Characters: Alice/Jasper
Genre: Hurt/Comfort
Word Count: 940
Summary: There’s always someone watching Jasper’s actions. What does Alice think of her husband’s decision to comfort Bella?
Author’s Notes: han_corrupted requested a follow-up to "A Risk

Comments

[massrie]

Absolutely Wonderful!!! I loved it! I was almost giddy with joy to see this posted up!! I love Jasper and his ability to calm emotions, or incite them whichever his preference may be at the time. Alice was .. Alice. Always forgiving and boosting his confidence. Well done! Can't wait to read more by you!!!

[sirenprincess]

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. It was just something I threw together for a request. Sometimes little scenes like this just pop into my head when someone suggests something.

There's definitely more to come. I just have so many ideas. I've got them all written down in a notebook. I'm coming up with ideas way faster than I can write them.

Thanks again for the feedback. I love seeing comments like this.

[sirenprincess]

Thanks so much. I'm happy to hear that you liked it. I was worried when you were so excited. But, it does prove that I can write something if someone wants to see something special. I prompt well. Thanks for the feedback. I love knowing people appreciate my work.

[damnfineemile]

I love how often your fics make me go "awwwwwwwwww"! Jasper and Alice are made for each other...and you write them so perfectly.

“I just can’t stand to see a girl cry,”

- Aw Jazz, he is so sweet. Seriously, this was so well-written and it really captured what's beautiful about their relationship :D

[sirenprincess]

Thank you so much! The goal of all of my stories is to make my reader go "Awww, Jazz!" Well, except for the smut, I guess. But even that usually has a few moments of "aww, Jazz."

I'm so glad you found my story well-written. That's really important to me, and it's something I work hard for.

It was fun in this one to have Alice give him a gentle scolding, but of course Alice loves him too much to really get mad. Besides, she knows that no one will ever be as hard on him as he is on himself. Gotta love those angsty boys.

[frust_sheep]

I think the epilogue was a great closure to the story. Love it. Oh it makes me nervous to know, that I have to decide soon, which was my fav. *lol* But now I have to read "Beautiful" first. :D

[sirenprincess]

Thanks! The epiloge ended up much cuter than I would have thought. I only wrote it because someone asked to see Alice' reaction to "A risk worth taking." I was really pleased with how it turned out. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

You did read "A risk worth taking" too, didn't you? I don't remember if you commented on it?

[frust_sheep]

Yeah, of course I read "A risk worth taking". But I did not comment, because I wanted to read the epiloge after that and then I thought I`m glad someone asked you to write Alice reaction, because anyhow I really liked these two ffs together. :) But I can comment to "A risk worth taking" also, if you want. :)

[sirenprincess]

You don't have to. I was just curious what you thought.

[snitchster]

Somehow Alice manages to be cute even when she is angry. this is awesome

[sirenprincess]

Writing annoyed Alice was quite the challenge, but I enjoyed it. I was happy with the way the gentle scolding came out. Alice could never really stay angry with Jazz. She loves him too much, and she knows that he'd punish himself more than anything she'd want anyway. She just had to remind him, but then she immediately had to comfort him again. He's so hard on himself. Thanks for commenting.