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[siranan]

Now, be wary of this fic. I can quite easily understand how it may not be everyones cuppa tea. It flicks between perspectives a little, and I welcome concrit, since I may be completely wrong in the tone of this.

Anyway,
Fandom: Doctor Who
Title: The Causes of Change
Summary: Quite odd, so I'm sorry if you don't like it. A slightly blurry portrait of

Comments

[hydref]

I really like this and I think you have the tone just right. I do love the idea of Jack/Ten/Martha.

[siranan]

Same! I'm faily sure it's just a matter of time before it happens in canon ;)
And Thank you for commenting so quickly, I always worry, and I'm glad somebody enjoyed it.
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[loony_daydreams]

I love it!

Your changes in perspective are in a constant order and structure, so it's very clear who's thinking what, no need to worry about it. More importantly, your characterisation is spot on, I can totally hear them thinking that, be very proud, it's great!

Plus that OT3 is like totally h4wt.

[siranan]

Your changes in perspective are in a constant order and structure, so it's very clear who's thinking what, no need to worry about it.

Oh thank you, this was my major worry about this fic. And thank you for commenting.

And, yes, this OT3 is rarrther hawt isn't it. I am fully expecting more fic to pop up as soon as ep11 airs. And preferably before :)
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[siranan]

Love it.
Oh thank you! And thanks for taking the time to comment.

Of course in my head Jack/Martha is a foregone conclusion.
Me too, me too. Definitely. Even if it never appears in canon, I will always believe it :)

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[skywardprodigal]

I love this.

How did you get Jack (and Martha) and the Doctor so right.

Oh...I'm going to print this out and keep it somewhere special. Yes. Yes. YES.

[siranan]

*blushes*
Thanks... I get worried, and it's amazing to hear lovely things like this. Have a cookie.
Thanks for commenting too!
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[stoplookingup]

Fear not! It works! It's wonderful! And better still -- it's fun to read

[siranan]

First off, thanks for your lovely comments. I do love longer reviews, they convince me someone's really enjoyed reading.

Also, thank you for the concrit. I know that one of my major failings is using too many words, and that sometimes it adds to the effect, and sometimes it confuses things. I am trying to work on this, but still, thank you so much for your opinion.

Overall, thank you for reading, and I hope when Jack somes back that something of the nature occurs!!
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