Comments | sionnain_fics: Fic: "Demeter's Daughter" Chapter 2. Sinister/Rachel, Rated MA.

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Fic: "Demeter's Daughter" Chapter 2. Sinister/Rachel, Rated MA.

Nov 22, 2007 12:39

Title: Demeter's Daughter, Chapter 2.
Authors: sionnain and resolute
Fandom: 616-verse X-Men, ends up AU
Pairing: Nathaniel Essex, aka Mister Sinister, and Rachel Grey
Rating: dear heavens, NC-17
Warnings, Notes, etc: Contains graphic sex and graphic violence. Dub-con. Makes references to non-con. In addition, Resolute thinks the X-Men treat Rachel ( Read more... )

sinister/rachel, comicverse, demeter's daughter, rachel/sinister, resolute, xmen

Comments 16

willowaus November 22 2007, 18:52:27 UTC

:hugs Rachel harder:

Still not happy with Sinny. Hmph.

He needs a teddy bear and then he'll be nicer and not need needles and blood and stuff. Meanie.

inathunderstorm November 22 2007, 18:59:00 UTC

I love that you used that icon. *dies*

resolute November 22 2007, 19:02:54 UTC

:LAUGHS:

mymatedave November 22 2007, 22:09:35 UTC

I love your Sinister/Rachel fics. And poor Rachel, from what you've written about her, she can't help but resist.

She can't just give in, she has to be forced to do it, even if she knows she can't win and it would be easier if she obeyed in the first place.

"I don't punish myself", she thought. "Things just happen." That seems be her motto.

resolute November 23 2007, 05:16:42 UTC

Aw, yay! I am glad you like her! I play her on theatrical_muse, so I think about this a lot . . .

inathunderstorm November 23 2007, 16:38:38 UTC

Thank you! I must give all props to Resolute for Rachel, she's totally awesome, isn't she?

:D Thank you for reading!!

mymatedave November 23 2007, 17:57:15 UTC

very much so.

sendthewolves November 23 2007, 05:07:41 UTC

*Loves*

I'll come back and give a better comment when I'm not running late for camping but I just wanted to say how much I'm enjoying this and am totally adoring Rachel.

resolute November 23 2007, 05:18:06 UTC

Yay! I love writing her, thank you!

inathunderstorm November 23 2007, 16:38:58 UTC

Thank you! And Res's Rachel is totally fantastic. *draws hearts*

galamb_borong November 23 2007, 06:04:37 UTC

I really like your take on Rachel. Sometimes I think the main joy of fanfic is the way people can spend more time exploring the characters' personalities than in the more action-oriented canon. Rachel in canon often strikes me as a bad-ass mini-Jean, but here she's much more well-rounded and her relationship with the Phoenix more complex. I especially like the touch of the Phoenix not always going along with Rachel.
Keep up the good work!

inathunderstorm November 23 2007, 16:39:48 UTC

resolute's Rachel is really fantastic--I love her! Playing Mr. Cold Evil Villain with her is really awesome :) Her Phoenix is awesome and SCARY. So glad you are enjoying the fic!!

angelus2402004 November 24 2007, 05:04:52 UTC

Awesome! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!

resolute November 24 2007, 14:17:33 UTC

Yay! There's more.