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Fic: "The Unquiet Affair of Rachel Grey and Nathaniel Essex", Rated MA. (5/10)

Jan 08, 2007 11:27

Title: The Unquiet Affair of Rachel Grey and Nathaniel Essex, Chapter 5.
Author: Sionnain
'Verse: 616, though occurs before current Uncanny arc and will obviously be AU.
Pairing: Rachel Grey/Nathaniel Essex (Rachel/Sinister)
Rating: MA
Warning: Violence, slight BDSM overtones.
Summary: In order to save her family and friends from Sinister's ( Read more... )

sinister/rachel, comicverse, rachel/sinister, unquiet affair, xmen

Comments 13

lonelywalker January 8 2007, 18:21:10 UTC

Mmmm... it's getting very eerie and interesting now. There's some kind of connection there, but whether it leads to danger or intimacy remains to be seen. I really like the way you're showing us fragments of Sinister, just little hints of what might be going on beneath the surface.

inathunderstorm January 8 2007, 19:18:32 UTC

Thank you! I love that the line is unclear. In my head it stays that way :-)

I'm trying to learn the "show not tell" technique of writer, at which I usually fail. So I'm glad it's working with Sinister :)

zomgitskristin January 8 2007, 19:07:37 UTC

Um. You're totally making me love this pairing. WHY ARE YOU DOING THAT!? WHY!? You're pushing all of my dysfunctional relationship buttons and it's AWESOME.

Do you think you'll post all of it before the end of the month? I'm doing crackvan this month and I totally want to rec this.

inathunderstorm January 8 2007, 19:19:59 UTC

Am I? YAY! This pairing is SO RANDOM and needs love. And I love love love dysfunctional relationships A LOT. ::pets them::

::pets you, for reading::

Yes, the fic will be posted by the end of the month. It's all done, and should be finished posting in two weeks or so :)

zomgitskristin January 8 2007, 19:47:55 UTC

YAY! NOW I HAVE FOUR STORIES TO REC! I need to spend time scouring ElJay fic communities today.

inathunderstorm January 8 2007, 19:49:10 UTC

Yay! OMG! ::TACKLES:: (But nicely, as you are sick)

vikingprincess January 8 2007, 22:08:26 UTC

very intense chapter - they are either going to be very good for one another, or horrendously bad. and I'm not sure if I want them to become lovers or not. there's a certain mental intimacy going on that's both creepy and very interesting.

inathunderstorm January 8 2007, 22:11:17 UTC

Thank you! Creepy and interesting is lovely compliment. Thanks again for reading--I'm really so happy that people are enjoying this very odd pairing!!

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inathunderstorm January 9 2007, 00:42:46 UTC

Why thank you! Glad you are enjoying the tale!!

angelus2402004 January 16 2007, 21:57:43 UTC

Super intense!!