Fic: Gratitudes, Magneto, Jean. Rated T, movieverse

Nov 21, 2006 15:46

Title: Gratitudes
Author: Sionnain
'Verse: XMMF (Movie-verse)
Word Count: 500 (5 100-word drabbles)
Pairing: Implied Charles/Erik, slight implied Erik/Jean if you really, really squint.
Rating: Teen
Summary: Five times Erik Lehnsherr gave thanks for Jean Grey. From pre-movies until post-X3.

AN: Written for the "Thankfulness" challenge at Like_this_One, the ( Read more... )

jean, magneto/jean, magneto, magneto/charles, xmmf

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st_aurafina November 22 2006, 11:57:55 UTC
Oh, that's just awesome, so full of menace and foreshadowing. I love the progression, and the way Erik is trying to hold onto his image of Jean at her happiest.

The Thanksgiving one made me laugh out loud ("My mother's china..."!), and the post-accident one made me nearly cry.

You're brilliant, you are.

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inathunderstorm November 22 2006, 16:27:08 UTC
Oh, thank you! ::beams:: I'm really glad that you liked it!

::blushes::

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sheepfairy November 22 2006, 22:53:57 UTC
Oh, that was lovely and awesome and sad in the best kind of way. I like the sparse writing style, and I especially love the last two sections.

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inathunderstorm November 22 2006, 22:56:46 UTC
Thank you! I tend to write WAY too much, haha, so those 100-word limits are always kind of hard for me :)

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penelopeblack November 23 2006, 00:25:03 UTC
Oh wow, amazing job. The last one is especially potent. :)

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inathunderstorm November 23 2006, 01:31:14 UTC
Thank you :)

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artaxastra November 23 2006, 04:00:52 UTC
OHhhhh. Just lovely! I like the gravy boat particularly!

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inathunderstorm November 23 2006, 04:12:10 UTC
Yay, thank you!!

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angelofsnow November 23 2006, 13:40:12 UTC
This was wonderful. Like always your work is amazing. You say so much about the characters and hint at so much more. I especially liked the Thanksgiving scene where young Scott is frustrated when Jean doesn't use her telepathy. And the idea of Charles being injured in a car accident is a very good one, it's a lot of guilt to Erik's character.

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