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nova_bright February 17 2009, 08:13:29 UTC
I can't decide if I like the action or the dialogue best. Everyone is so goddamn amazing.

I think though that this time round, I am really falling for this version of Brian. He's got the same sort of terrier protectiveness about him that I associate with him, but this version is so rough, and vicious.

Every part with Bert in a dress is my favourite.

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sinsense February 17 2009, 17:28:09 UTC
Bert! Bert sometimes crashes in the back room at Goodwill, because the guys who work there like him for whatever reason. It's warm! And they give him the dresses that are on deep deep discount!

I really worried that I wasn't quite doing justice to Brian -- there's not a whole ton of canon for him, obviously -- and I'm glad that was the personality/character that came across. It's what I was trying for.

I seriously can't thank you enough, though, let me say.

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metal_dog February 17 2009, 13:26:55 UTC
THAT.IS.FUCKING.HOT!

Phew...

I am saving part II til tomorrow night.. i'll be looking forward to it!

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sinsense February 17 2009, 17:28:26 UTC
*victory arms!* Thank you! I hope you keep enjoying it.

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earth_is_a_star February 17 2009, 15:45:23 UTC
You seem to anticipate my every need in life. AND I NEEDED THIS.

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sinsense February 17 2009, 17:08:50 UTC
YESSSS! :D

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sangredulce February 17 2009, 20:42:29 UTC
I started reading this at work! BECAUSE I'M AN IDIOT.

So I have to stop! But IDONTWANNA.

Okay. I'll be back. Love this.

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sinsense February 18 2009, 01:03:21 UTC
DORK. And yet I totally understand, having done this far too many times. I have a lot of unshared tags on my delicious that are caught at some middle chapter, with the description: ">:(!"

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whatchamacall1t February 17 2009, 23:49:08 UTC
OH GOD BRIAN FUCK ME FUCK ME FUCK ME

i mean um...frank can come too i really like this!

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sinsense February 18 2009, 01:01:07 UTC
LOLOLOLOL I approve of your reaction. Thank you!

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